Sunday, 3 February 2013

Day Dream






Beautiful flower, fragrance all around,
I am in valley or on cloud.
I heard a scream,
that broke my day-dream.
That’s my mom calling aloud.

By Misha

That's my daughter's maiden attempt at poetry (I prodded her to try) and I am the culprit, again.

She chose the picture from google search (she rejected the picture that I chose).



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  1. Cifar3 February 2013 at 05:23

    Like mother like daughter,good attempt

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  2. The Mukhtiars3 February 2013 at 05:23

    Very nice, god bless

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  3. magiceye3 February 2013 at 07:05

    Wow!!! This is brilliant for a 10 year old!!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond4 February 2013 at 04:12

      thanks uncle.I know nothing about poetry. just started learning.

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  4. umashankar3 February 2013 at 07:09

    Congratulations! You have got a precocious gem!

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  5. DEBAJYOTI3 February 2013 at 07:51

    that's a supeeeeeeeeeer hit poem!!!!!! absolutely loved it!! ask her to create a blog, i will be the first person to subscribe to it!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond4 February 2013 at 04:19

      thank you! But I am not prepared for that I think - Misha

      Hi Deb! Till she starts her own blog, she can be my guest writer - Meenakshi

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  6. carol l mckenna3 February 2013 at 08:00

    Lovely and adorable photo ^_^

    Carol of: (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

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  7. Sri Valli3 February 2013 at 09:10

    Ahw! that's so sweet, Very wonderfully written for that age! :)

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  8. Deepak Kripal3 February 2013 at 11:27

    ha ha... WOW MEENAKSHI.. you have so many shades.. started on a serious note.. ended up on the naughtiest streak..

    I LOVE IT..

    you replicated my childhood... Sssshhhhhh... :0

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond4 February 2013 at 04:24

      Oh! That's fine Deepak, your next comment Misha will answer.

      BTW, Thanks for reading!

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  9. Deepak Kripal3 February 2013 at 11:31

    Oh I am the culprit again..
    published the comment before reading the comment... it's Misha not Meenakshi..

    Ahem(clearing throat)..

    WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DEBUT TO THE BEAUTIFUL MISHA..

    10 on 10 from DEEPAK UNCLE.. :)

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  10. Unknown3 February 2013 at 11:56

    So sweet!! Give her a hug from me! :)

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  11. Anonymous3 February 2013 at 17:05

    Poetry seems to run in the family. It is a beautiful piece of writing, and that holds true regardless of age. We are all poets from birth, we just cloak ourselves with layers of prosaicness as we can grow up, till we can no longer find the poet any more. It is wonderful when a parent encourages the child to stay connected to her inner poet. Misha, you are one lucky girl and a lovely poet.

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  12. Eliz Frank3 February 2013 at 19:00

    What a wonderful practice ... mom and daughter haiku. ;-)

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond4 February 2013 at 04:30

      Aha!I do not know haiku but thank you so much.

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  13. Vishal Rathod3 February 2013 at 19:21

    Sweet start by the young one .

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  14. Rat3 February 2013 at 19:56

    that's a very sweet one. :-)

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  15. Unknown3 February 2013 at 20:34

    The daughter is as talented as her mom.Loved your first attempt,Misha.darling.keep it up!!

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  16. Amrit Sinha3 February 2013 at 21:31

    Wow wow wow ... this is awesome Misha ... this form of poetry is known as Limerick, and I find it one of the toughest forms to write ... but you did it so brilliantly, amazing .... hoping to read more from you :-)

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  17. Unknown3 February 2013 at 22:30

    My God ! what a beautiful poem...She is following your footsteps...Aakhir beti ahem....bhanji kiski hai ;) By the way Subhorup Dasgupta may be correct....Poetry runs in the family...remember bhayia's idiotic poems ? Although funny but they have poetic element in it..Anyways love u Misha n keep it up

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  18. Ranjana's craft blog4 February 2013 at 00:35

    OMG!this is awesome....

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  19. Rajni Sinha4 February 2013 at 02:05

    on mamma's footsteps ---very promising God Bless her

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  20. Mridula4 February 2013 at 02:43

    Lovely attempt by your daughter!

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  21. Mousumi 4 February 2013 at 03:38

    Beautiful :-)
    She is so creative!!

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  22. Mixi4 February 2013 at 04:20

    Misha is sure to follow in her mom's footsteps. And her choice of picture further shows her good taste :) Great going!

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  23. indu chhibber4 February 2013 at 05:34

    Misha is a fragrant flower herself-we can already se a budding poetess here--like mom,like daughter!!!
    Bless you Misha.

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond5 February 2013 at 02:34

      thanks for your blessings!I will try for more.

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  24. Reshma4 February 2013 at 09:52

    Wow!! lovely pic and a wonderful verse :)

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  25. Woman'n'Beyond5 February 2013 at 02:35

    thanks a lot!!!

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  26. Bhavana5 February 2013 at 06:11

    hahahaha! Your daughter has composed a perfect poem for her mother's blog! Mothers--the way they bring us down to reality...:)

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