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Hi Meenakshi,Wow, lovely Haiku for the spring season. Beautiful personification of the stem to damsels. Loved reading this, a great start to Monday morning. Did you have a good start? :) :) :)RegardsJayMy Newest Blog Post | My Entry to Indiblogger Get Published
Yes, in fact lovely start when these damsels came dancing to my mind and pour out of my pen performing to waltz.Thanks Jay!
Hi Meenakshi Loved the Haiko.Specially the line 'soft petals quivering with breeze, are very touching.
"Mute prayer bells" - I loved the intonation here ... wonderfully said !!!
Lovely set of haiku indeed!:)
Love the line about the bells!
Thank you so much!
Love the idea of blossoms as damsels dancing!
Meenakshi... you never falter.. beautiful haiku yet again.. damsels dancing.. WOW.
Pluck or Clap ... a lovely linesd. Thank you for sharing :)
Oblivious of the feeling the spectator is hiding, they perform, spread their beauty!Thanks a lot!
"stems play waltz " these lines makes me dance..lovely !!
Thank you so much for liking!
"Mute prayer bells" - such lovely imagery. I'm loving your heralding-the-spring series of haikus of late :)
Thanks Meenakshi, these haiku are dedicated to a 'Carpe Diem' site which gives daily prompts and lots of inspiration for writing haiku.
I am enchanted by the image of "mute prayer bells."Crushing One Blossom
So am I, Thanks Mark!
Wonderful set of haiku ~ can hear the bells ~ Carol of (A Creative Harbor) ^_^ on Blogger
Thanks Carol, May these prayer bells spread love and peace.
Just great--the one who plucks flowers does not recognize that the soft quivering petals are silent prayer bells--how harsh we are.
Thanks Ma'am, my damsels required this sympathy.
These words are dancing in my head this morning! Just wonderful images in both, just wonderful!
Thanks Wabi, I am dancing with you!
Lovely haiku. That last one is breathtaking. Pure haiku, that one.
Is that so! Thank you so much! It brightened my day!!
I sense a layer of meaningUnder those soft petalsMusic for the soul.Cheers!JzB
Music for the soulwisdom to the mindThose who listen.Thanks Jazz you inspired me to right this one.
apki kavitaye samvedana me guthe huye vichar hain
dhanyavad Gaj ji!
I'm waiting for the damsels' waltz... Musical Haiku!!
They will be all around soon, wait for spring my dear!
Beautiful. I am amazed at the beauty of this line, 'Mute prayer bells'Keep sharing these lovely haiku :)
This is very close to my heart too, Saru, I am happy it reached yours.Thanks!
Mute prayer bells is a very nice phrase.
Thanks you so much!
“The earth has music for those who listen.”
Absolutely Purba, Thanks for your visit!
Wow! Haikus now! Exquisite!
The elegant dance made me smile... damsels scented in the sun. :-)Eliz