Tuesday, 12 March 2013

Heart Felt


Old withered buds
Make way for fresh camellia
Vase a transitory inn

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Boisterous Laugh
Drizzled with tears
Eyes equalize


For Carpe Diem

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  1. Unknown12 March 2013 at 07:29

    Meenakshi ,this is unique !! " Vase a transitory inn". is very appealing.

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  2. Mark12 March 2013 at 07:38

    The image of the inn is fresh and wondrous!

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  3. Sreeja12 March 2013 at 07:39

    Oh this is really so beautiful!Great!

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  4. Jazzbumpa12 March 2013 at 07:49

    These are both nicely done, though the 2nd is a bit puzzling.

    I sense a tone of underlying sadness.

    Cheers!
    JzB

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond16 March 2013 at 06:59

      When we laugh a lot, tears have tendency to appear. Eyes have way to equalize.

      Thanks for being here.

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  5. joanne12 March 2013 at 07:53

    I feel deep meanings in the first...both are lovely

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  6. Easwar Arumugam12 March 2013 at 08:46

    Wow! This is lovely composition.

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  7. Anonymous12 March 2013 at 09:39

    Vase a transitory inn -- a really great interpretation!
    :)

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  8. Pradyumna12 March 2013 at 10:59

    :) wonderful!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond16 March 2013 at 07:03

      I am glad these are worth reading. Thanks a lot!

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  9. Rheumatologe12 March 2013 at 11:08

    I like the transitory inn!

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  10. Amrit Sinha12 March 2013 at 11:12

    You interpreted vase in a beautiful way ... wow ... you surely have a great imagination :-)

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  11. Anonymous12 March 2013 at 11:31

    Oh I love the idea of the flower stopping into a transitory inn! A new way of looking at a vase!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond16 March 2013 at 07:06

      Thanks Wabi, coming from you it is an honour.

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  12. DEBAJYOTI12 March 2013 at 12:03

    wow, this is like our life. we make way for the new ones as well.

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond16 March 2013 at 07:07

      That was the idea behind it. Everything is transitory.

      Thanks for visiting.

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  13. Anonymous12 March 2013 at 12:15

    very nice. Thank-you for sharing

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  14. PirateGunn12 March 2013 at 12:19

    Fresh flowers...new season, yes

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond16 March 2013 at 07:13

      It is a positive way to look at it and essence of transition.

      Thanks a lot!

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  15. Maggie Grace12 March 2013 at 13:55

    Love the first one. Emotional connection to refreshing the vase with a new camellia.

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  16. brudberg12 March 2013 at 14:16

    Refreshing indeed. ;-)

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  17. Reshma12 March 2013 at 16:05

    Vase as an inn!! awesome imagination you have got Meenakshi:)

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  18. Anonymous12 March 2013 at 17:11

    nice Line Meenakshi,i Love it
    Book taxi in chandigarh

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  19. Vishal Rathod12 March 2013 at 19:27

    Great Imagination Meenakshi

    Travel India

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  20. Rajni Sinha13 March 2013 at 20:00

    wow Meenakshi

    one of your best---so philosophical

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  21. AmitAag13 March 2013 at 22:26

    Wow! Great!!

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  22. Anonymous13 March 2013 at 23:54

    I loved the vase analogy there.. :)

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  23. magiceye14 March 2013 at 03:19

    These are brilliant!

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  24. Sri Valli15 March 2013 at 06:13

    Deep thoughts Meenakshi! Loved equally both haiku :)

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  25. Mixi16 March 2013 at 05:06

    The best thing about coming back to this blog after a brief hiatus is that I get to read one beautiful haiku after another. The second one is particularly lovely. "Eyes equalize" - what a thought!

    With your encouragement, I have finally written my first set of Haiku. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts on them -

    http://fisheyes-meanie.blogspot.in/2013/03/botanical-musings-haiku.html

    Thanks in advance :)

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond16 March 2013 at 07:25

      This one is my favourite too. Thanks for appreciating.

      I read you haiku, they are awesome. You are excellent at whatever you choose to do.

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  26. Eliz Frank16 March 2013 at 08:00

    Another beautiful poem/haiku. I like this.
    Eliz

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  27. Maliny16 March 2013 at 08:20

    Both the sets are awesome Meenakshi. The first one is way too good ! :)

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  28. G's world21 March 2013 at 10:24

    I should say this heart-felt too... Amazing :)

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