Saturday, 16 March 2013

First Cherry Blossom



First cherry blossom
Heralds new life
Miracle in making

Miracle in making
Touched by divine hands
Folded in Prayer

Folded in Prayer
In shadow of Morning sun
Birds join in

Birds join in
Followed by Insects, Divine
Cacophony



Picture take from: Google Search

62 comments:

  1. Divine cacophany and not 'symphony' - that's interesting. In fact, creation is also a kind of cacophany.

    ReplyDelete
  2. I agree, and may be finding symphony in this cacophony is the purpose of life.

    ReplyDelete
  3. I just swam through the symphonies your mind created... an adorned cacophony!Just loved it...meenakshi!

    ReplyDelete
  4. You interpreted it in a way I could have never imagined ... divine cacophony ... wow :-)

    ReplyDelete
  5. Very balanced flow of thought...

    ReplyDelete
  6. A beautiful morning perfectly described.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Great rhythm, Meenakshi. The following lines are exemplery
    .Miracle in makjng
    Touched by divine hands
    folded in prayer.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Replies
    1. Why not, listen to morning chirping of birds, Their cooing has no rhythm, no symphony in human term. But listening to them is sheer pleasure.

      Thanks for being here.

      Delete
  9. Such simple and beautiful words yet a little chaos in the end to describe a perfect morning... :) do visit my blog sometime.. :)

    http://peaceandchaosinmymind.blogspot.in/

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Even this chaos is peaceful who care to listen.

      Thanks Maverick.

      Delete
  10. Divine
    Cacophony -- really like that ^^ well-penned set

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Beautiful series on cherry blossoms. Really divine ...

      Delete
  11. Replies
    1. ...and to nature's celebration.

      Thanks for visiting.

      Delete
  12. Replies
    1. I am happy you could see through my eyes.

      Thanks.

      Delete
  13. These are wonderful

    I love the cacophony

    Cheers!
    JzB

    ReplyDelete
  14. Beautiful! I saw cacophony was a prompt from another haiku blog. Sometimes cacophony in nature can certainly be lovely.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yes, I have mixed two prompts in these sets.

      Thanks for your presence.

      Delete
  15. aloha Meenakshi - i like the idea in the last ku of bird and insect sound. it seems to me there are a lot of possibilities in that. aloha

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Nature and life is full of possibilities. isn't it!

      Thanks a lot!

      Delete
  16. Very beautiful Meenakshi....
    Enjoyred reading this beautiful haiku on nature in cascading form :)

    ReplyDelete
  17. Love this cascade. I especially like how you've combined nature and spirituality. A beautiful interpretation of the cherry blossoms blooming :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Cherry blossoms are very much loved and revered in Japan. There they feel a spiritual connection to its fragile petals. I have tried to rekindle that feeling here.

      Thanks Meenakshi.

      Delete
  18. Deep thoughts. I hope I understood it right :)

    Regards,
    Jahid
    Flashbacks

    ReplyDelete
  19. divine cacaphony..!!creation is devoid of noise and ..the discordance is so beautifully...orchestrated...

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. 'Orchestrated discordance', I liked this phrase and its deep meaning.

      Thanks Debu.

      Delete
  20. Wonderful Haiku Meenakshi specially the connection with one another. Spring starts.

    Travel India

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Vishal, I am happy I could infuse the feeling of spring in it.

      Delete
  21. Beautiful interpretation, Meenakshi. Highly unique.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Your words brought a big smile on my face, Thanks a lot!

      Delete
  22. Your verses are truly melodious-loved them.

    ReplyDelete
  23. A soothing, serene verse that is tranquil even in its cacophonous end like the cherry blossoms.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks you so much for these kind words. You made my day.

      Delete
  24. wow..your haiku is really nice..I liked the way you have presented the events that occur with sunrise..this cacophony is beautiful :)

    Do visit: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Sanjana, I would surely visit your site.

      Delete
  25. totally lyrical, your cacophony !! loved it !!!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Prema, I really liked your take on this prompt.

      Delete
  26. The miracle of nature that unfolds before our eyes.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yes, even then we lack faith. Strange!

      Thanks.

      Delete
  27. enthralling set of haiku. paints a clear picture of nature. beautiful.
    and thank you for reading my haiku. :)

    ReplyDelete
  28. A very enjoyable cacophony :) Nothing brightens up your day like nature indeed.

    ReplyDelete
  29. very well written.. quite an unique thought. lovely.

    ReplyDelete
  30. A beautifully revealed haiku on nature. Enjoyed the intricacies and apparent beauty. :) :)

    ReplyDelete
  31. Wonderful poem. I'll define it as feel free, let free and be free

    Cheers
    Vishal
    www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com
    vishal-newkidontheblock.blogspot.com

    ReplyDelete