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The 1st haiku is marvelous!!
How picturesque. It is not the fantasy of a naive mind, but the eternal hope of an optimistic one!The picture you've used for the second haiku is actually kinda creepy :D
Thanks for appreciating!The second one is like how we feel at times,ideas crop up in the jungle of mind, take various shapes but still nothing worth the pen and paper. Hence the picture.
loved both the haikus :) beautifully conceived . .
Thanks Maliny for your visit and kind comment.
Beautiful haiku Meenakshi.. some deep thoughts there.. blank paper, idle pen.. loved the way you concluded the second haiku.. it connected everything with the imagination of the thinker.. Spot On!!!
Thank a lot, You got the idea behind it.
You have an eye for natural beauty! The depth of the idea hidden behind the lines is awesome.
Or may be you are too generous towards me.Thanks for keeping my spirits up!
Beautiful set of haiku Meenakshi ... I especially like the first one. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us all here on Carpe Diem.
Thank you so much!
The first haiku spins a delirious scene that is not all it seems or can be! And love the comparison in the second haiku with the state of "writer's block"!
Thanks Gemma, I wish it were true! and writer's block, I experience it too often.
like "satsaiya ke dohare jyon navik ke tir. dekhan men chote lage ghav kare gambhir." nice haiku thanks
Thanks Gaj, I am honoured, truly!
I'm afraid I know all too well the blank paper and the idle pen!Verdant Bowl
Oh we all struggle with that!Thanks for visiting!
Wonderfully creative and sophisticate haiku ~Carol of A Creative Harbor ^_^
I loved the first one. It's so magical.
The second one is so lyrical
Thanks Jannifer for visiting and appreciating!
How well I know the blank page and idle pen! But my heart goes to your first verse. I too wish for its inhabitants to be more compassionate toward green earth mother. Well done!!
The image and the words of the first Haiku are simply out of the world...Thankfully an idle pen does not mean an idle mind, it only means overcrowded mind.
yeah, overcrowded with wild ideas, but nothing making sense. Thanks Reshma!
The second one is just brilliant.
I loved the way you talk of love and compassion, and then put it across "fantasy of naive mind."The 2nd haiku ponders in deeper territories, perhaps "blank paper and idle pen" explores the phases that we all encounter while writing.Wonderful set !!!
Thanks Amrit! I am happy you liked them.
What a write up, The pictures exactly compliment the words. Lovely .
Thanks Vishal! It takes more efforts to find a picture that suits the tone of words.
The second one sets the mind racing. Beautiful droplets.
Thanks USP! I hope you are never disappointed.
Hi Meenakshi,Lovely Haiku, both of them. Naive, blank and idle, somehow making a connect there. Keep up the good work :)RegardsJayMy Newest Blog Post | My Entry to Indiblogger Get Published
Lovely-but neither is your paper blank ,nor your pen idle!
Thank you so much for such beautiful words of appreciation.
loved both! different but equally powerful!
Thanks Deb! I am glad this time I didn't disappoint you.
Great are both, but the 1st one has an edge..!Loved them, Meenakshi:)
I love them both... but then, I'm the newbie here. ;-)Eliz