Saturday 17 November 2012

Love's Longing...


cuckoo in the woods...
singing sweetly in turn,
songs that pine, songs that yearn...

songs that yearn for absolute love,
quest teasing, unyielding, undone...
cuckoo will sing but find none!



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16 comments:

  1. Amrit Sinha17 November 2012 at 05:50

    Awesome ... this was so well expressed ... your posts sing melodiously :-)

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond17 November 2012 at 05:51

      Thanks for an equally awesome comment...made my day!

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  2. Rajni Sinha17 November 2012 at 11:13

    yearning and search of true love---expressed in such soft words and the cuckoo is a perfect choice to depict such feelings---a very vivid poem

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  3. Bhavana17 November 2012 at 22:10

    Do you write for me? You capture my mood perfectly. Thank god for women like you...

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  4. Deepak Kripal17 November 2012 at 22:42

    yearning for love with a touch of pain expressed perfectly... love it

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond17 November 2012 at 23:44

      Love and pain go hand in hand. Thanks for appreciating!

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  5. Sri Valli18 November 2012 at 02:45

    The last line is hitting hard! Poor cukoo!!

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  6. magiceye18 November 2012 at 04:02

    Aww poor cuckoo..
    and the quest continues..

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  7. Bikram19 November 2012 at 05:24

    I guess that its destiny to sing and find none .. sad


    Bikram's

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  8. AmitAag19 November 2012 at 21:31

    Lovely! lovely!! lovely!!!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond19 November 2012 at 22:08

      Thank you, thank you, thanks you! Thank you very much, Sir!

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