a woman...a being...and everything in between
Hard to say which one is more perfect!
Coming from you, it is an absolute delight!
दुनिया में जिधर देखो हजारो रस्ते दीखतेमंजिल जिनसे मिल जाए बो रस्ते नहीं मिलतेकिस को गैर कहदे हम और किसको मान ले अपना मिलते हाथ सबसे है दिल से दिल नहीं मिलते वाह . बहुत उम्दा,सुन्दर व् सार्थक प्रस्तुति . हार्दिक आभार आपका ब्लॉग देखा मैने और कुछ अपने विचारो से हमें भी अवगत करवाते रहिये.
beautiful! Last line is so true! Thanks for your kind visit!
Life has some questions which don't have answers. Beautiful write.
And some answers leave you disconcerted so better be without them.Thanks Sir!
I loved the Hindi one, more... so lovely....
Thank Sreeja! I felt I couldn't do it in both version , so this is my first small attempt!
Thank yo so much, I am so happy that you liked them.
Hello Meenakshi.. I realized the real beauty of these lines as I delved deeper into their substance.. Really loved it.It's amazing that you were able to get the same soul in two bodies (languages)..I always emphasize on your versatility.. Once again you have proven me right.. I really look forward to some more gems like these. Absolutely Superb.
Thanks Deepak for these amazing words! I always thought of writing my Hindi verses in English but was not sure if I can do justice to it. So this was a small attempt. This encouragement means a lot!
Wow ... am speechless ... to begin with, the English lines are beautiful, the messages clear and crisp, and so true. And then comes the masterpiece 4 lines, well, I can't comment on that. Your Hindi lines touch the chord of my senses. Absolute perfection. Please, do write some more like this !!!
A Big thanks to you, Amrit! I wouldn't have tried it, If you hadn't encouraged me. I owe this to you:)
The problem with yruth :) beautifully expressed!
Truth sometimes scares us awa.y. Thanks for reading
Superb-sometimes the answers are even more disappointing than reality.
Yes Mam, Ignorance is a veil that keeps us from heart-breaks.Thanks you so much for reading!
Absolutely wonderful.. both the verses actually.
I am happy that you liked my attempt, Jas. Thanks!!
Profound thought so succinctly described...Applause for such an unique and wonderful attempt!!
Thanks for encouragement, it really means a lot!
Beautiful, Meenakshi! I also don't know which version I like better!!
I love, love, LOVE these lines! You have delivered across such a beautiful message so simply and in such an endearing way! I cant decide which one I love more- the first para, the second or the hindi verse!! :DThis gives me a great happiness to leave my questions unanswered too. Afterall, ignorance IS bliss :)Loved it Meenakshi Ji! :D
Thanks Kirti! It really feels great when efforts are received so well. Welcome to my blog! Hope to see you more often.
Meenakshi.. I just LOVE what you wrote.. it is like the story of my life at times. thanks... that is very well written.. and loved the hindi version.. it is splendid..
It is everybody's story Ashivani. The knowledge of apple always shows the exit door from paradise, make believe but paradise nonetheless.Thanks for appreciation and welcome to my space.
so emotive those lines are ! keep writing . . love to read more from you :)
Thanks Maliny! That's a brush of feel-good I needed!
har sukoon hai usko jo anjaan haigyaan se behtar agyaan hai...
Wah-wah! You completed it!
Another lovely poem... I'm now following you on GFC.Eliz
Thanks a lot! you made my day!