Sunday, 11 November 2012

Silent Anger...




No words...
words allay your guilt,
I'll let the storm built...




(My first attempt at haiku - written for Haiku Heights)
Picture taken from: fineartamerica.com

27 comments:

  1. I'll let the storm build. - Great description.

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  2. Short and nor sweet. Very well written :)

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  3. Short and Not sweet. Very well written :)

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    1. Thanks, coming from you is really special!

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  4. It's even rhyming!...Awesome haiku Meenakshi :)

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  5. "words allay your guilt"! so true... full marks to your attempt! Keep writing :)

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  6. simply beautoful

    I have no idea what haiku is .. but what you have written is lovely.

    Bikram's

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    1. believe me, I myself had no idea, but then I got to know that its a three line poem not exceeding 17 syllables, that is it and I wrote it. I don't even know whether it qualifies for a haiku or not.

      Thanks for your encouraging comments!

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  7. thts a silent killer.. short nd to the point.. well said meenakshi..

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  8. aloha Meenakshi - you have a good eye for the "moment" you speak about in your haiku. i like that.

    as you mentioned this is your first attempt with haiku and i saw you like to read (many of the same books i like even in those few you start with, of your long list) i'd like to leave this link here for you:

    http://www.ahapoetry.com/

    that is "Ah Ha Poetry" it is one of many excellent sites that offer great insight into haiku (and other poetic forms). i like this one a lot but there are as i say many others. especially explore the left column under "Haiku" - Jane is a brilliant writer and speaker and her haiku almost always catch "a moment" in unique ways.

    i hope you continue to write haiku and enjoy it as much as i do. aloha.

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    1. I thanks myself for letting myself loose to dabble in the world called blogging,that introduced me to wonderful people like you. Thanks for your kind words and sharing this link, Rick. Please keep visiting my blog and give me feedback to improve it. I will look forward to your remarks in my posts.

      Thanks a lot!

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  9. hahahahhaha...that was good...revenge is a dish best served cold :)

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    1. Thanks Prema, in marital discord, silence is woman'e best weapon, and believe me it works better than tears. ha..ha..ha!

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