A storm of love? Now that's something I'd love for sure. Someone to storm my heart with love. Liked the thought a lot. :)
Well, Kanshicho haiku doesn't have syllable restrictions as far as I know :) So it is legit in that form. At Haiku Heights, I request contributors to stick to a maximum of 17 , in which case it is off by one syllable :)
Er.. saw your comment at my blog :) Counting syllable is quite easy. Just split into how you would pronounce it and the number of sounds in each line would give you syllables.
Let your love raise a storm (6, one syllable per word) Blaze me, raze me, whirl me a-way (8, one per word first 6, last word has 2) Make me your own (4, one per word) :)
so your name Meenakshi would have 3 since you speak it as Mee-na-kshi :) Hope that helps?
you are an expert at to the point poetry in few words... beautiful lines meenakshi... i ll stay tuned for more..
ReplyDeleteThanks Deepak. This is Haiku. I learnt this form from fellow bloggers only. Thanks for appreciating!
DeleteA storm of love? Now that's something I'd love for sure. Someone to storm my heart with love. Liked the thought a lot. :)
ReplyDeleteWell, Kanshicho haiku doesn't have syllable restrictions as far as I know :) So it is legit in that form. At Haiku Heights, I request contributors to stick to a maximum of 17 , in which case it is off by one syllable :)
Er.. saw your comment at my blog :) Counting syllable is quite easy. Just split into how you would pronounce it and the number of sounds in each line would give you syllables.
DeleteLet your love raise a storm (6, one syllable per word)
Blaze me, raze me, whirl me a-way (8, one per word first 6, last word has 2)
Make me your own (4, one per word) :)
so your name Meenakshi would have 3 since you speak it as Mee-na-kshi :) Hope that helps?
nice one again Meenakshi
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajni!
Deletewow, loved it!! but why follow stringent guidelines when you want to express your thoughts/feelings?
ReplyDeleteby the way, i wrote a 55 word thingy sometimes back :D
Actually I got hooked to this form because you learn to tell more in few words.
DeleteYes it has its own regulations! Thanks for appreciating!
Such a passionate haiku full of love ... you are amazing !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Amrit, credit goes to you! I picked up this form from your blog!
DeleteI love this.waiting for many more.
ReplyDeleteThanks you:)
Deletegreat haiku.. i don't mind commenting twice :)
ReplyDeleteThat's so sweet of you! Thanks:)
DeleteVery powerful haiku.... liked it a lot!
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Stuck in race of time
Thanks Pranita, welcome to my blog!
DeleteAn enjoyable storm.
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much!
DeleteAn animated, exhilerating haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gemma!
DeleteOh my gosh - your words are visceral. Swept me away!
ReplyDeleteThanks Judith, your kind words are a pat on my back!
DeleteNice plea --- the world is so full of those pleaing for love, so few offering/
ReplyDeleteThanks Sabio!
DeleteVery passionate Meenakshi.I hope you find your love.
ReplyDeleteI already have! Thanks for visiting!!
DeleteWow..it has got that power of love.... great!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja, I find you an incredible poet, Thanks for appreciation!
DeleteStormy passion! Wow!
ReplyDeleteThanks Deepak!
Deletehmmm I hope the storm a beautiful one :) and takes you on a whirwhind tour of lifeeeee :)
ReplyDeleteall the best
Bikram's
Thank you so much!
DeleteVery romantic haiku ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace!
DeleteThere's something comforting in being someone's own. Nice haiku.
ReplyDeletethanks Hazel!
DeleteLove the way you've described love. It can indeed be a storm :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jolly, welcome to my space!
Deleteaaaahh.... ecstatic this made me.. wonderful!!!
ReplyDeleteDeath By Breeze