a woman...a being...and everything in between
you are an expert at to the point poetry in few words... beautiful lines meenakshi... i ll stay tuned for more..
Thanks Deepak. This is Haiku. I learnt this form from fellow bloggers only. Thanks for appreciating!
A storm of love? Now that's something I'd love for sure. Someone to storm my heart with love. Liked the thought a lot. :)Well, Kanshicho haiku doesn't have syllable restrictions as far as I know :) So it is legit in that form. At Haiku Heights, I request contributors to stick to a maximum of 17 , in which case it is off by one syllable :)
Er.. saw your comment at my blog :) Counting syllable is quite easy. Just split into how you would pronounce it and the number of sounds in each line would give you syllables.Let your love raise a storm (6, one syllable per word)Blaze me, raze me, whirl me a-way (8, one per word first 6, last word has 2)Make me your own (4, one per word) :)so your name Meenakshi would have 3 since you speak it as Mee-na-kshi :) Hope that helps?
nice one again Meenakshi
wow, loved it!! but why follow stringent guidelines when you want to express your thoughts/feelings? by the way, i wrote a 55 word thingy sometimes back :D
Actually I got hooked to this form because you learn to tell more in few words. Yes it has its own regulations! Thanks for appreciating!
Such a passionate haiku full of love ... you are amazing !!!
Thanks Amrit, credit goes to you! I picked up this form from your blog!
I love this.waiting for many more.
great haiku.. i don't mind commenting twice :)
That's so sweet of you! Thanks:)
Very powerful haiku.... liked it a lot!Well done!Stuck in race of time
Thanks Pranita, welcome to my blog!
An enjoyable storm.
Thank you so very much!
An animated, exhilerating haiku!
Oh my gosh - your words are visceral. Swept me away!
Thanks Judith, your kind words are a pat on my back!
Nice plea --- the world is so full of those pleaing for love, so few offering/
Very passionate Meenakshi.I hope you find your love.
I already have! Thanks for visiting!!
Wow..it has got that power of love.... great!
Thanks Sreeja, I find you an incredible poet, Thanks for appreciation!
Stormy passion! Wow!
hmmm I hope the storm a beautiful one :) and takes you on a whirwhind tour of lifeeeee :) all the best Bikram's
Thank you so much!
Very romantic haiku ~
There's something comforting in being someone's own. Nice haiku.
Love the way you've described love. It can indeed be a storm :)
Thanks Jolly, welcome to my space!
aaaahh.... ecstatic this made me.. wonderful!!! Death By Breeze