तेरे जाने के बाद
फिर ये दिल आबाद हुआ,
ये तेरे जाने के बाद हुआ।
बहुत घूमा तेरी गलियों में परिंदा बन के
आज ये बंदा आदमज़ाद हुआ।
तेरे आँगन के पेड़ की टहनियों पे जिसे बांधे रखा,
आज वो चाँद भी आज़ाद हुआ।
यूँ कुछ तेरे जाने के बाद हुआ,
कि फिर से ये दिल आबाद हुआ।
Picture taken from: hearth-n-home.blogspot.com
I loved the composition.... both the photo and the lines. :)
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