Friday, 30 November 2012

तेरे जाने के बाद



फिर ये दिल आबाद हुआ,

ये तेरे जाने के बाद हुआ। 


बहुत घूमा  तेरी गलियों में परिंदा बन के

आज ये  बंदा आदमज़ाद हुआ।


तेरे आँगन के पेड़ की टहनियों पे जिसे बांधे रखा,

आज  वो चाँद भी आज़ाद हुआ।


यूँ कुछ तेरे जाने के बाद हुआ,

कि फिर से ये दिल आबाद हुआ।


Picture taken from: hearth-n-home.blogspot.com

13 comments:

  1. I loved the composition.... both the photo and the lines. :)

    Nisha

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    1. Thanks for these encouraging words, Nisha. Welcome to my blog!

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  2. nice one reminded me of

    terey jaane ke baad
    teri yad ayee

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  3. You are the Queen of Poetry ... loved this as always :-)

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    1. You got me scared! Thanks for liking it!

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  4. wow meenakshi.. you have created some classic atmospherics here..
    brilliant poetry

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    1. Thanks, Deepak, Just read Sunil Arya on your blog, awesome composition!

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  5. Yeah.. He is my senior in fact... He is an amazing writer... I love some of his compositions...

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  6. just shows when one door closes another opens ..

    Bikram's

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    1. Kal Jahan hum the, wahan aaj koi aur hai

      woh bhi ek daur tha, ye bhi ek daur hai!

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    2. bahut khoob kaha..

      life it carries on :)


      Ps.. I just saw today that you are from chandigarh (well i hope i have got that right).. Awesome that is MY CITY :)

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    3. I am from Patiala, but married in Chandigarh. It is been more than 12 years, now Chandigarh is MY CITY!! I feel lucky:) Thanks for dropping by

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