Thursday, 8 November 2012

Do I have a choice?



'Your artful innocence 

is my nemesis....

to my imminent refusal, 'please' is a perfect bait..

a flutter of eyes, entreating curve of lips

...and the deal is made.'


16 comments:

  1. Main kitna bhi sach kahoon apne baare mein lekin .....
    Tum muskurate ho to jhootha sa pad
    Jaata hai.....

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    1. you know me , these lines kept haunting me entire day!

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  2. Awww... this is so beautiful! No choice!!!!

    The word verification still haunts

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    1. iissshhhhh! I am sorry, I dont know how to remove it, please help...

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  3. The deal is made perfectly...
    A few lines convey much.. :)

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  4. Thanks, Manjulika, welcome to my blog!

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  5. Aah sweet...both the emotion and the verse!

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  6. Thank you for getting rid of word verification!!!!

    Cheers!!

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  7. i think its awesome.. perfect blend of words... a lot has been said between the lines.., great...

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    1. Thanks Deepak, An appreciation coming from people like you, makes it worthwhile!

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