Thursday, 8 November 2012

Do I have a choice?



'Your artful innocence 

is my nemesis....

to my imminent refusal, 'please' is a perfect bait..

a flutter of eyes, entreating curve of lips

...and the deal is made.'


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16 comments:

  1. Amrit Sinha8 November 2012 at 22:49

    Wow lovely :-)

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  2. Woman'n'Beyond9 November 2012 at 02:09

    Thanks GS!

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  3. Unknown9 November 2012 at 04:17

    Main kitna bhi sach kahoon apne baare mein lekin .....
    Tum muskurate ho to jhootha sa pad
    Jaata hai.....

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond9 November 2012 at 05:55

      you know me , these lines kept haunting me entire day!

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  4. magiceye9 November 2012 at 04:49

    Awww... this is so beautiful! No choice!!!!

    The word verification still haunts

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond9 November 2012 at 05:56

      iissshhhhh! I am sorry, I dont know how to remove it, please help...

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  5. Anonymous9 November 2012 at 06:49

    The deal is made perfectly...
    A few lines convey much.. :)

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  6. Woman'n'Beyond9 November 2012 at 06:52

    Thanks, Manjulika, welcome to my blog!

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  7. Bhavana9 November 2012 at 07:12

    Aah sweet...both the emotion and the verse!

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  8. Woman'n'Beyond9 November 2012 at 07:14

    Thanks, your words I value a lot!

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  9. Sri Valli9 November 2012 at 08:07

    How sweet! Beautiful words!

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  10. magiceye10 November 2012 at 01:53

    Thank you for getting rid of word verification!!!!

    Cheers!!

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  11. Deepak Kripal17 November 2012 at 22:44

    i think its awesome.. perfect blend of words... a lot has been said between the lines.., great...

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond17 November 2012 at 23:48

      Thanks Deepak, An appreciation coming from people like you, makes it worthwhile!

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