Tuesday 26 March 2013

Morning Musings


Hop, jump, bump together
Li’l dots of mind,
Shine, spark, dart around
Specks of all kind.
Pick me! pick me! Chant aloud
Scramble for my eye,
Form a big wave together…
Crash on...some die.
Which one to choose and chisel?
Out of this slush,
Or let them fight it out,
Oh! This morning flush.


Picture taken from: theredboa.blogspot.com

16 comments:

  1. Such a beautiful poem on musing and now I'm musing about it :-) What a wonderful way to describe what goes on with thoughts inside our minds. Here's one of mine which is also about thoughts.

    http://www.gracydsouza.com/2012/09/20/the-mystery-of-mind/

    Cheers!

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  2. Making a choice in this mass of slush is a problem indeed.

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  3. Ah the games mind plays with you...It can trap you in its labyrinth.

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  4. This is really outstanding!You are a deep thinker Meenakshi & you express your thoughts eloquently too!Ah this slush!

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  5. This is beautiful ... a different genre you have captured here, but perfectly rendered :-)

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  6. This is a masterpiece, Meenakshi. How do get such brilliant ideas?

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  7. Ah! The classic problem of plenty!

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  8. wow lovely poem on morning musings.. :-)

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  9. What a poem Meenakshi! Loved it.

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  10. Lovely thoughtful poem Meenakshi :)

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  11. felt like painting.... lovely.....

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  12. I love this poem and the picture too.Deeply reflective. :-)
    Eliz

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