Saturday, 16 March 2013

First Cherry Blossom



First cherry blossom
Heralds new life
Miracle in making

Miracle in making
Touched by divine hands
Folded in Prayer

Folded in Prayer
In shadow of Morning sun
Birds join in

Birds join in
Followed by Insects, Divine
Cacophony



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  1. Tomichan Matheikal16 March 2013 at 23:20

    Divine cacophany and not 'symphony' - that's interesting. In fact, creation is also a kind of cacophany.

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  2. Woman'n'Beyond16 March 2013 at 23:21

    I agree, and may be finding symphony in this cacophony is the purpose of life.

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  3. Panchali16 March 2013 at 23:38

    I just swam through the symphonies your mind created... an adorned cacophony!Just loved it...meenakshi!

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  4. magiceye16 March 2013 at 23:41

    Beautifully crafted

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  5. Amrit Sinha17 March 2013 at 00:20

    You interpreted it in a way I could have never imagined ... divine cacophony ... wow :-)

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  6. Ananth Vitlani17 March 2013 at 02:02

    Very balanced flow of thought...

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  7. anthonynorth17 March 2013 at 02:02

    A beautiful morning perfectly described.

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  8. Unknown17 March 2013 at 02:25

    Great rhythm, Meenakshi. The following lines are exemplery
    .Miracle in makjng
    Touched by divine hands
    folded in prayer.

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  9. Magical Mystical Teacher17 March 2013 at 04:09

    Can cacophony really be divine? :)

    Blossom Song

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 06:22

      Why not, listen to morning chirping of birds, Their cooing has no rhythm, no symphony in human term. But listening to them is sheer pleasure.

      Thanks for being here.

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  10. Sreeja17 March 2013 at 04:14

    lovely....

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  11. Unknown17 March 2013 at 05:36

    Such simple and beautiful words yet a little chaos in the end to describe a perfect morning... :) do visit my blog sometime.. :)

    http://peaceandchaosinmymind.blogspot.in/

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 06:28

      Even this chaos is peaceful who care to listen.

      Thanks Maverick.

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  12. Anonymous17 March 2013 at 05:55

    Divine
    Cacophony -- really like that ^^ well-penned set

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  13. brudberg17 March 2013 at 11:22

    Wonderful hymns to spring.

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 06:33

      ...and to nature's celebration.

      Thanks for visiting.

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  14. Unknown17 March 2013 at 14:04

    Divine take!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 06:34

      I am happy you could see through my eyes.

      Thanks.

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  15. Jazzbumpa17 March 2013 at 17:43

    These are wonderful

    I love the cacophony

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  16. Maggie Grace17 March 2013 at 18:23

    Beautiful! I saw cacophony was a prompt from another haiku blog. Sometimes cacophony in nature can certainly be lovely.

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 06:40

      Yes, I have mixed two prompts in these sets.

      Thanks for your presence.

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  17. Anonymous17 March 2013 at 23:04

    aloha Meenakshi - i like the idea in the last ku of bird and insect sound. it seems to me there are a lot of possibilities in that. aloha

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 06:50

      Nature and life is full of possibilities. isn't it!

      Thanks a lot!

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  18. The Mukhtiars17 March 2013 at 23:59

    beautiful one

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  19. Sri Valli18 March 2013 at 04:37

    Very beautiful Meenakshi....
    Enjoyred reading this beautiful haiku on nature in cascading form :)

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  20. Mixi18 March 2013 at 05:17

    Love this cascade. I especially like how you've combined nature and spirituality. A beautiful interpretation of the cherry blossoms blooming :)

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 06:56

      Cherry blossoms are very much loved and revered in Japan. There they feel a spiritual connection to its fragile petals. I have tried to rekindle that feeling here.

      Thanks Meenakshi.

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  21. jahid18 March 2013 at 05:45

    Deep thoughts. I hope I understood it right :)

    Regards,
    Jahid
    Flashbacks

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  22. debu18 March 2013 at 06:18

    divine cacaphony..!!creation is devoid of noise and ..the discordance is so beautifully...orchestrated...

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 06:58

      'Orchestrated discordance', I liked this phrase and its deep meaning.

      Thanks Debu.

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  23. Vishal Rathod18 March 2013 at 07:46

    Wonderful Haiku Meenakshi specially the connection with one another. Spring starts.

    Travel India

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 06:59

      Thanks Vishal, I am happy I could infuse the feeling of spring in it.

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  24. Anonymous18 March 2013 at 07:53

    Beautiful interpretation, Meenakshi. Highly unique.

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 06:59

      Your words brought a big smile on my face, Thanks a lot!

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  25. indu chhibber18 March 2013 at 08:51

    Your verses are truly melodious-loved them.

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  26. umashankar18 March 2013 at 09:07

    A soothing, serene verse that is tranquil even in its cacophonous end like the cherry blossoms.

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 07:01

      Thanks you so much for these kind words. You made my day.

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  27. Sanjana 18 March 2013 at 10:40

    wow..your haiku is really nice..I liked the way you have presented the events that occur with sunrise..this cacophony is beautiful :)

    Do visit: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 07:02

      Thanks Sanjana, I would surely visit your site.

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  28. Prema19 March 2013 at 09:23

    totally lyrical, your cacophony !! loved it !!!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 07:02

      Thanks Prema, I really liked your take on this prompt.

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  29. Purba19 March 2013 at 16:02

    The miracle of nature that unfolds before our eyes.

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond20 March 2013 at 07:03

      Yes, even then we lack faith. Strange!

      Thanks.

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  30. Sankara Jayanth S20 March 2013 at 08:55

    enthralling set of haiku. paints a clear picture of nature. beautiful.
    and thank you for reading my haiku. :)

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  31. Reshma20 March 2013 at 14:20

    A very enjoyable cacophony :) Nothing brightens up your day like nature indeed.

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  32. Rat21 March 2013 at 01:10

    very well written.. quite an unique thought. lovely.

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  33. G's world21 March 2013 at 10:22

    A beautifully revealed haiku on nature. Enjoyed the intricacies and apparent beauty. :) :)

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  34. Vishal Bheeroo24 March 2013 at 12:52

    Wonderful poem. I'll define it as feel free, let free and be free

    Cheers
    Vishal
    www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com
    vishal-newkidontheblock.blogspot.com

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