Saturday, 6 April 2013

Burnt


Fire licked
All that remains
Charred ash

Charred ash
Smitten by smoke, any guesses
What it was


For: Haiku Heights
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16 comments:

  1. Easwar Arumugam6 April 2013 at 09:02

    There's no smoke without fire. Beautiful Haiku.

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  2. Panchali6 April 2013 at 09:26

    That was simply superb, Meenakshi. Encompassing everything in it's arms.... now turned into dust!:(

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  3. Ananth Vitlani6 April 2013 at 09:47

    very powerful...

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  4. Vishal Rathod6 April 2013 at 10:22

    The last line was too much Meenakshi

    Travel India

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  5. Jayashree Srivatsan6 April 2013 at 12:28

    Fire does destroy without a trace

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  6. indu chhibber6 April 2013 at 18:31

    Your lines made me think-fire destroys all boundaries & identifications .

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  7. Cifar6 April 2013 at 23:22

    'Fire licked'very good phrase nice haiku

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  8. magiceye6 April 2013 at 23:23

    And the enquiry begins! Lovely!

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  9. Amrit Sinha7 April 2013 at 00:27

    No use guessing ... what's lost is lots forever :-(

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  10. Anonymous7 April 2013 at 02:41

    amazing !!! ' fire licked' !!! .. any guesses what it was !! depth of thoughts .....!!!

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  11. Unknown7 April 2013 at 08:45

    Awesome. Great suspense. What is the secret?

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  12. Sankara Jayanth S8 April 2013 at 09:29

    the barrier of eternal loss.. brilliant haiku.. warns us to be careful before we burn something. Probably, both on the inside and the outside.

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  13. KISLAYA GOPAL8 April 2013 at 23:36

    Innovative and thoughtful! 'Any guesses what it was' thought provoking lines!

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  14. Reshma24 April 2013 at 17:33

    Hmmm fire doesn't care what is in its path, it is unrelenting...

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  15. Sreedev Soman30 April 2013 at 02:04

    Beautifully Written...

    Sreedev Soman @ KookyDom

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  16. Ankita 19 July 2013 at 13:24

    thats nice!

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