Tuesday, 26 March 2013

Morning Musings


Hop, jump, bump together
Li’l dots of mind,
Shine, spark, dart around
Specks of all kind.
Pick me! pick me! Chant aloud
Scramble for my eye,
Form a big wave together…
Crash on...some die.
Which one to choose and chisel?
Out of this slush,
Or let them fight it out,
Oh! This morning flush.


Picture taken from: theredboa.blogspot.com
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  1. Anonymous26 March 2013 at 02:39

    Such a beautiful poem on musing and now I'm musing about it :-) What a wonderful way to describe what goes on with thoughts inside our minds. Here's one of mine which is also about thoughts.

    http://www.gracydsouza.com/2012/09/20/the-mystery-of-mind/

    Cheers!

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  2. Cifar26 March 2013 at 03:26

    wonderful poem,

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  3. Tomichan Matheikal26 March 2013 at 04:06

    Making a choice in this mass of slush is a problem indeed.

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  4. Reshma26 March 2013 at 15:13

    Ah the games mind plays with you...It can trap you in its labyrinth.

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  5. indu chhibber26 March 2013 at 19:44

    This is really outstanding!You are a deep thinker Meenakshi & you express your thoughts eloquently too!Ah this slush!

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  6. Amrit Sinha27 March 2013 at 00:48

    This is beautiful ... a different genre you have captured here, but perfectly rendered :-)

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  7. Unknown27 March 2013 at 03:15

    This is a masterpiece, Meenakshi. How do get such brilliant ideas?

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  8. Arnie27 March 2013 at 06:55

    Ah! The classic problem of plenty!

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  9. Rat27 March 2013 at 08:50

    wow lovely poem on morning musings.. :-)

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  10. Easwar Arumugam27 March 2013 at 08:57

    Nice composition.

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  11. Vishal Rathod27 March 2013 at 22:30

    Nice Penned down Meenakshi

    Travel India

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  12. Diwakar Narayan29 March 2013 at 00:48

    What a poem Meenakshi! Loved it.

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  13. Sri Valli31 March 2013 at 03:04

    Lovely thoughtful poem Meenakshi :)

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  14. Sreeja4 April 2013 at 09:47

    felt like painting.... lovely.....

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  15. Eliz Frank6 April 2013 at 03:37

    I love this poem and the picture too.Deeply reflective. :-)
    Eliz

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  16. Shamsud Ahmed7 April 2013 at 01:17

    Veracity....love it

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