No,
I am not alone, physically, for you are sitting by me.
Eyes
locked in the bleeping images of screen,
keyboard
and phone taking turns to keep your fingers busy.
Sometimes
a cursory glance comes my way, deflects, unable to pierce the orb.
My
eyes trying to engage yours in a dialogue, manage a languid monologue.
No I
am not alone, a drop that blurs my sight, sits on my lashes briefly,
listens
to my silent soliloquy, before giving in to gravity,
Too
heavy to bear the load, I so callously put on its delicate shoulders.
No,
I am not alone, when you go to sleep, fatigued, waiving a wordless goodnight.
Moon
meanders through the window pane, sits beside.
With
his silvery hands in mine, we weave together night.
till
it’s time to go beyond the fence of dawn,
Many
such woven nights I tucked away in the drawer.
…may
be some day you open it by chance…
I
know you love me, but push aside any worthless emotion.
Urgencies
of life, hardly assign time to wasteful demonstration.
Seed
of love that lies dormant in a recess of heart, still has life.
Before
moulds of mundane eat away that seed, touch the cheeks for reasons holier than
need.
Before
eagle of time swoops away our chance, hold my hand, let’s relive that romance.
Say
you love me before this void becomes our fate. Say, say it before it’s too
late.
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Before moulds of mundane eat away that seed, touch the cheeks for reasons holier than need.
ReplyDeleteloved the lines and the poem
Thanks Rajni!
DeleteUrgencies of mundane life mercilessly stop the seed of love from sprouting. Beautiful poetry ... so captivating ... so enchanting.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sir.
DeleteWow ... the lyrics played in my mind like a beautiful song ... I loved the rhythm, specially in the last few lines ... good one !!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Amrit, I couldn't keep my love for rhyming away for long, so it appeared in the end.
DeleteWow! Superb
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Jahid
Flashbacks
Thanks Jahid!
Deletewell...today's competitive life snatches away romance out ! Biggest fact of Indian urban life in a poem ! Amazing creation ! great to have discovered your blog !
ReplyDeletePleasure is all mine. Thanks a lot!
DeleteJust wonderful..:-)
ReplyDeleteMeenakshi, this is a poem full of emotions. It truly lays bare the emotions hidden under the folds of the heart!!
ReplyDeleteLife's bitter truth depicted sooooo beautifully !!
Thanks Ma'am. I am happy you liked it.
DeleteThis is quite the emotional tug of love... Beautifully delivered. ;-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
Thanks Eliz!
Deletebeautiful poetry , amazing stuff
ReplyDeleteThanks for liking.
DeleteBeautiful.....Well written :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Megha!
DeleteWow! wonderful poem Meenakshi! I loved the flow of words in this poem!
ReplyDeleteThe last stanza is superb! :)
Thanks Valli!
Deletesimply superb Meenakshi, brilliantly captured yearnings of the heart in a busy world where time is priceless and pricey too!!
ReplyDeleteIn this mad rush of life, relationships are often the first causality. Either we ignore them or take them for granted. Communication is the lifeline of any relationship. Flow of words ensure that blood of vitality flow through relationships.
DeleteThanks Reshma!
The loneliness,the desire for change comes out beautifully in your poem--the end gives succor that it is only a difference of perspective & not lack of affection.
ReplyDeleteSometimes it only that we start take people and relationships for granted. We never get to know when inertia seeped into relations and made them dull.
DeleteThanks Ma'am.
I know you love me, but push aside any worthless emotion.
ReplyDeleteUrgencies of life, hardly assign time to wasteful demonstration.
Seed of love that lies dormant in a recess of heart, still has life.
Before moulds of mundane eat away that seed, touch the cheeks for reasons holier than need.
Before eagle of time swoops away our chance, hold my hand, let’s relive that romance.
Say you love me before this void becomes our fate. Say, say it before it’s too late.
beautiful.....
Thanks a lot! I am glad it is worked for you.
DeleteReally good...
ReplyDeleteThanks for being here.
DeleteThis could very well be any modern couple or other relationship! Wonderfully put!
ReplyDeleteThis is a usual story of many relationships today. Alas! Important things in life not being given due importance.
DeleteThanks for reading, Roshni!
true portrayal of a longing heart
ReplyDeleteThanks Cifar for reading and appreciating.
DeleteThanks a lot!
ReplyDeleteLyrically beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Deepak!
DeleteWow its almost a song. English pop singers can hire you as a lyricist Meenakshi.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. These is really encouraging.
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