Wednesday, 27 February 2013

Strangers



Glassy water
Sky descends to kiss, merge
Perfect mates




Naughty pebble
Breaks the rendezvous, scrambled
Strangers



For: Carpe Diem
Pictures taken from: Google search
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36 comments:

  1. Cifar27 February 2013 at 01:13

    artistic lines,paints the scenery with words,nicely written

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  2. magiceye27 February 2013 at 01:17

    These are brilliant! :)

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  3. Eliz Frank27 February 2013 at 02:04

    I love the beauty of your words... ;-)

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  4. Unknown27 February 2013 at 03:20

    Amazing...the combination or meeting of rain and water is simply awesome...!!!

    ANd the pebbles in the water are a perfect mix of it's semblance...!!!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond2 March 2013 at 07:00

      Thanks Anjan, My interpretation was the image of sky reflected by glassy surface of water. And hence the meeting of water and sky which is broken by the pebble.

      I am so happy to have your interpretation. It has given a new dimension to this piece.

      Thanks a lot!

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  5. Magical Mystical Teacher27 February 2013 at 03:34

    Yes, one needs to watch out for those naughty pebbles. You never can tell what they'll do or how they'll scramble things!

    All the Young Strangers

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond2 March 2013 at 07:02

      Sometimes small or petty issues are enough to create problems in a steady relationship. It so absolutely necessary to be in guard against them.

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  6. Panchali27 February 2013 at 06:21

    Meenakshi, its a thoughtful one ..sometimes I am at loss of words and don't know what to say so hmmmmm becomes a nodding :-))))Enchanting imagery...:)

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond2 March 2013 at 07:03

      Ma'am just your presence here is enough to motivate me. Thanks a lot for being here.

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  7. Sreeja27 February 2013 at 06:32

    lovely and thoughtful....

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  8. Maliny27 February 2013 at 07:07

    contrasting thoughts depicted wonderfully in those haikus ! thoughtful indeed :)

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  9. joanne27 February 2013 at 08:12

    mates and strangers....really nice haiku

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  10. Easwar Arumugam27 February 2013 at 08:29

    Beautiful! The striking contrast accentuates the beauty of the haiku.

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  11. Amrit Sinha27 February 2013 at 09:32

    I loved the phrase "scrambled strangers."

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  12. Chèvrefeuille27 February 2013 at 09:34

    Excellent haiku set. Very different scenes you have used.

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  13. brudberg27 February 2013 at 13:26

    Very unique take on the prompt. I really liked it.

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  14. Anonymous27 February 2013 at 14:21

    I love your words and also how the two different images have so much in common. Thank you for sharing :)

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond2 March 2013 at 07:07

      Two contrasting sides of one picture.

      Thanks a lot for reading it so carefully.

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  15. Anonymous27 February 2013 at 14:59

    Lovely images!

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  16. Vishal Rathod27 February 2013 at 20:52

    Excellent Haikus ....

    Travel India

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond2 March 2013 at 07:08

      Thanks Vishal, for making an effort to come and read.

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  17. AmitAag28 February 2013 at 21:56

    Dazzlingly brilliant!

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  18. Sri Valli28 February 2013 at 22:59

    Oh! Lovely lines Meenakshi...I especially enjoyed 2nd! Good observation put into words!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond2 March 2013 at 07:09

      Both haiku complement and complete the story.

      Thanks for reading and leaving your valuable comments.

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  19. Reshma1 March 2013 at 17:21

    Brilliant haiku meenakshi:) loved the visual impact your words create...

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