Wednesday, 27 February 2013

Strangers



Glassy water
Sky descends to kiss, merge
Perfect mates




Naughty pebble
Breaks the rendezvous, scrambled
Strangers



Pictures taken from: Google search

40 comments:

  1. artistic lines,paints the scenery with words,nicely written

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  2. I love the beauty of your words... ;-)

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  3. Amazing...the combination or meeting of rain and water is simply awesome...!!!

    ANd the pebbles in the water are a perfect mix of it's semblance...!!!

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    1. Thanks Anjan, My interpretation was the image of sky reflected by glassy surface of water. And hence the meeting of water and sky which is broken by the pebble.

      I am so happy to have your interpretation. It has given a new dimension to this piece.

      Thanks a lot!

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  4. Yes, one needs to watch out for those naughty pebbles. You never can tell what they'll do or how they'll scramble things!

    All the Young Strangers

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    1. Sometimes small or petty issues are enough to create problems in a steady relationship. It so absolutely necessary to be in guard against them.

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  5. Meenakshi, its a thoughtful one ..sometimes I am at loss of words and don't know what to say so hmmmmm becomes a nodding :-))))Enchanting imagery...:)

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    1. Ma'am just your presence here is enough to motivate me. Thanks a lot for being here.

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  6. contrasting thoughts depicted wonderfully in those haikus ! thoughtful indeed :)

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  7. mates and strangers....really nice haiku

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  8. Beautiful! The striking contrast accentuates the beauty of the haiku.

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  9. I loved the phrase "scrambled strangers."

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  10. Excellent haiku set. Very different scenes you have used.

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  11. Very unique take on the prompt. I really liked it.

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  12. I love your words and also how the two different images have so much in common. Thank you for sharing :)

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    1. Two contrasting sides of one picture.

      Thanks a lot for reading it so carefully.

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    1. Thanks Vishal, for making an effort to come and read.

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  14. Oh! Lovely lines Meenakshi...I especially enjoyed 2nd! Good observation put into words!

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    1. Both haiku complement and complete the story.

      Thanks for reading and leaving your valuable comments.

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  15. Brilliant haiku meenakshi:) loved the visual impact your words create...

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