Thursday, 28 February 2013

Journey


Strayed
No trail of grains
To lead back

Wanderlust
Penumbra of clouds suffices for
Shelter


For:  Carpe Diem

40 comments:

  1. What a surprise ... Meenakshi ... you were inspired in a different way as our other contributors. I like this take on the haiku by Chiyo-Ni very well. Thank you for sharing. Namaste.

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    1. Thanks a lot a very encouraging response. Thanks a lot!

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  2. Loved it, specially the first one .. amazing !!!

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  3. Oh, I would love a penumbra of clouds for my shelter!!

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    1. I can look for hours at changing shapes of clouds against the iridescent blue sky.

      Thanks Wabi!

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  4. This is excellent Meenakshi. I love the visual language. :-)
    Eliz

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  5. Love the idea of a wandering nomad with the sky as blanket!! It is scary to be lost but nice to wander off without a care for the worldly worries...

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    1. Rightly put, Reshma. It is scary to be lost but nice to wander off! Loved this comment.

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  6. 'Clouds ... wanderlust' Beautiful composition.

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  7. Fabulous indeed!
    Thank you Meenakshi:)

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    1. I am indebted for such kindness. Thanks Sir!

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  8. Very good one :) totally loved it.

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  9. a Beautiful, beautiful haiku!! LOVED it :)

    Defiant Princess
    http://khanvibes.blogspot.com/

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  10. Your Haikus have become more enthralling and more observant...great going...!!!

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    1. This compliment made my day. I can't thank enough.

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  11. Brilliant imagery...They’re so directly to the point and artistic.Awesome!

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