Thursday, 28 February 2013

Journey


Strayed
No trail of grains
To lead back

Wanderlust
Penumbra of clouds suffices for
Shelter


For:  Carpe Diem

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  1. Chèvrefeuille28 February 2013 at 04:13

    What a surprise ... Meenakshi ... you were inspired in a different way as our other contributors. I like this take on the haiku by Chiyo-Ni very well. Thank you for sharing. Namaste.

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond2 March 2013 at 08:36

      Thanks a lot a very encouraging response. Thanks a lot!

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  2. The Mukhtiars28 February 2013 at 04:35

    Thanks for sharing , lovely

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  3. magiceye28 February 2013 at 06:14

    Ideal traveller! Lovely!

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  4. Unknown28 February 2013 at 07:57

    Fabulous! Thanks for sharing.

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  5. Amrit Sinha28 February 2013 at 08:10

    Loved it, specially the first one .. amazing !!!

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  6. Unknown28 February 2013 at 08:14

    love your approach of the prompt

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  7. Anonymous28 February 2013 at 11:35

    Oh, I would love a penumbra of clouds for my shelter!!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond2 March 2013 at 08:37

      I can look for hours at changing shapes of clouds against the iridescent blue sky.

      Thanks Wabi!

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  8. Suhas Naik1 March 2013 at 03:24

    Good composition !

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  9. Eliz Frank1 March 2013 at 07:10

    This is excellent Meenakshi. I love the visual language. :-)
    Eliz

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  10. Anonymous1 March 2013 at 08:48

    Its VEry Nice,i Like This
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  11. Reshma1 March 2013 at 18:26

    Love the idea of a wandering nomad with the sky as blanket!! It is scary to be lost but nice to wander off without a care for the worldly worries...

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond2 March 2013 at 08:39

      Rightly put, Reshma. It is scary to be lost but nice to wander off! Loved this comment.

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  12. Easwar Arumugam2 March 2013 at 07:45

    'Clouds ... wanderlust' Beautiful composition.

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  13. Cifar2 March 2013 at 22:52

    exquisite haiku

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  14. Shilpa Garg3 March 2013 at 09:07

    This is a good one too!

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  15. A Homemaker's Utopia3 March 2013 at 21:02

    Nicely framed..:-)

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  16. AmitAag3 March 2013 at 21:56

    Fabulous indeed!
    Thank you Meenakshi:)

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond4 March 2013 at 05:52

      I am indebted for such kindness. Thanks Sir!

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  17. Anonymous3 March 2013 at 22:58

    Very good one :) totally loved it.

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  18. Defiant Princess4 March 2013 at 05:32

    a Beautiful, beautiful haiku!! LOVED it :)

    Defiant Princess
    http://khanvibes.blogspot.com/

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  19. Unknown4 March 2013 at 06:14

    Your Haikus have become more enthralling and more observant...great going...!!!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond16 March 2013 at 07:58

      This compliment made my day. I can't thank enough.

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  20. Panchali4 March 2013 at 19:58

    Brilliant imagery...They’re so directly to the point and artistic.Awesome!

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