a woman...a being...and everything in between
:) lovely!!
Thanks Deepak, thanks a lot for always finding my writings worth a read.
brilliant !
Thank you, Sis!
You are really good :)
That's too kind of you!Thanks a lot!
Beautiful
Very nice as always.Thought provoking.
Thanks Ma'am, you are encouraging as always!
Beautiful haiku.
Thanks Kristjaan!
Makes one think ~ lovely ~ps. Am your latest GF follower ~ ^_^
You are the 50th person to join my site. I thanks you for the bottom of my heart.
This is sweet; a mild jealousy which is not a scary as that green eyed monster.
Just a little complaint...against fate may be.Thanks Eliza!
Really true :)
Thanks Megha!
Now this one went over my head Meenakshi.
hahaha.......Ma'am this a labourer's envy, sun has fixed hours of work, it is about to call it a day but labourer has to slog longer to be able to fire his hearth. That's it!
Thanks Meera!
Thank you Gaj!
Thank you for your nice comment at my blogAnd for the explanationThis was as far over My head as the sunCheers!JzB
hahaha.........you are most welcome, you could make a haiku even out of this comment, awesome!
Great...words...and the explanation gave me much deeper insights to what i was thinking...!!!
Thanks Anjan, I would love to have your interpretation.
Profound Haiku, thanks to the explanation able to appreciate it better:)
Thanks Reshma, BTW what did you think about it!
I first thought the lady of a house is talking to a man :P
When I first read this one, I thought it was about a wife complaining to her husband :DYour explanation gave a different and better perspective :)
Hmmm........honestly I didn't think that way, but it clicks!It is always heartening to know different interpretations, how your readers view your piece.Thanks a lot, Meenakshi!
I love this take on the prompt .... unique !!!
Great!
Thank you, Sir!
wonderful haiku again
Thank Cifar!
Superb. A 'heated' convo with the Sun... :)
Anything can flare up emotions in a miserable situation.Thanks a lot!
its good and its Haiku and its from you
Thanks a lot with a big smile :)
Thank yo so much for reading!
:) lovely!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Deepak, thanks a lot for always finding my writings worth a read.
Deletebrilliant !
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sis!
DeleteYou are really good :)
ReplyDeleteThat's too kind of you!
DeleteThanks a lot!
Beautiful
ReplyDeleteVery nice as always.Thought provoking.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ma'am, you are encouraging as always!
DeleteBeautiful haiku.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjaan!
DeleteMakes one think ~ lovely ~
ReplyDeleteps. Am your latest GF follower ~ ^_^
You are the 50th person to join my site. I thanks you for the bottom of my heart.
DeleteThis is sweet; a mild jealousy which is not a scary as that green eyed monster.
ReplyDeleteJust a little complaint...against fate may be.
DeleteThanks Eliza!
Really true :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Megha!
DeleteNow this one went over my head Meenakshi.
ReplyDeletehahaha.......Ma'am this a labourer's envy, sun has fixed hours of work, it is about to call it a day but labourer has to slog longer to be able to fire his hearth. That's it!
DeleteThanks Meera!
ReplyDeleteThank you Gaj!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your nice comment at my blog
ReplyDeleteAnd for the explanation
This was as far over
My head as the sun
Cheers!
JzB
hahaha.........you are most welcome, you could make a haiku even out of this comment, awesome!
DeleteGreat...words...and the explanation gave me much deeper insights to what i was thinking...!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjan, I would love to have your interpretation.
DeleteProfound Haiku, thanks to the explanation able to appreciate it better:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma, BTW what did you think about it!
DeleteI first thought the lady of a house is talking to a man :P
DeleteWhen I first read this one, I thought it was about a wife complaining to her husband :D
ReplyDeleteYour explanation gave a different and better perspective :)
Hmmm........honestly I didn't think that way, but it clicks!
DeleteIt is always heartening to know different interpretations, how your readers view your piece.
Thanks a lot, Meenakshi!
I love this take on the prompt .... unique !!!
ReplyDeleteGreat!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sir!
Deletewonderful haiku again
ReplyDeleteThank Cifar!
DeleteSuperb. A 'heated' convo with the Sun... :)
ReplyDeleteAnything can flare up emotions in a miserable situation.
DeleteThanks a lot!
its good and its Haiku and its from you
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot with a big smile :)
DeleteThank yo so much for reading!
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