Monday, 18 February 2013

Iceberg




Iceberg
Real power lies beneath
Humility or deception


 Mighty ship
Sinks with its vanity
Forbidden glory

For: Carpe Diem
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44 comments:

  1. The Mukhtiars18 February 2013 at 03:55

    beautiful words ...........

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  2. Unknown18 February 2013 at 03:56

    Lovely lines...yes...Ice berg is one of best examples one can give of humility or it's hidden potentials...

    and A might ship...full of self esteem sinks like a proud person who gets destroyed by his relentless pride...great example and can be portrayed in real life as well...!!!

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  3. Anonymous18 February 2013 at 04:12

    Wonderful set of haiku ~ love the first one .....real power lies beneath ....^_^

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  4. C.S.H18 February 2013 at 04:16

    I'm really amazed by the second set, the picture especially, is that the Titanic? Very chilling words indeed but beautiful all the same. Both sets are stunning.

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond23 February 2013 at 06:11

      Yes that's Titanic, though the one created for the movie. Thanks you so much for visiting this site and appreciating my effort.

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  5. magiceye18 February 2013 at 05:00

    Beautifully presented... Crisp!

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  6. Unknown18 February 2013 at 06:20

    A masterpiece.Very well expressed.

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  7. Himadri Singha18 February 2013 at 06:59

    First one is awesome :)

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  8. Jazzbumpa18 February 2013 at 07:20

    Man against nature
    In endless needless battle
    Prideful then the fall

    JzB

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  9. Charleen18 February 2013 at 08:00

    Humility or deception- good question!

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  10. Amrit Sinha18 February 2013 at 08:20

    The sad tale of Titanic :-(

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  11. Panchali18 February 2013 at 09:21

    Wow...so well written, so well conceived!!! You are truly amazing...

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  12. Reshma18 February 2013 at 10:18

    Profound set Meenakshi!! real power sure lies within...

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond23 February 2013 at 06:16

      The power that is shown off is often superficial. Thanks for reading , Reshma!

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  13. brudberg18 February 2013 at 12:35

    The first one is my favorite.

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  14. Chèvrefeuille18 February 2013 at 13:30

    Just beautiful ... I am in awe ... my favorite is the second.

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  15. joanne18 February 2013 at 13:37

    and it was that deceptive power that certainly showed that vain ship a thing or two...actually, a horror story of greed, death, self-preservation, and cold hearts...

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond23 February 2013 at 06:20

      It brutally demonstrated that size does matter but other way around, bigger the pride, faster the fall.

      Thanks a lot!

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  16. Mixi19 February 2013 at 01:13

    wow! a very profound take on the prompt.. beautifully written!

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  17. indu chhibber19 February 2013 at 01:36

    Well said Meenakshi--real power lies beneath...very often humility is but deception.

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  18. Easwar Arumugam19 February 2013 at 03:36

    Simply superb! Hi, where do you get all those words and in which loom you weave them. Kudos!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond23 February 2013 at 06:36

      Wow! Such wonderful words of appreciation surely lend verve to my pen.

      Can't thank enough!

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  19. Akash Govindarajan19 February 2013 at 08:52

    A simple poem! Yet it can be related to life! :)

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  20. Rajni Sinha19 February 2013 at 09:20

    great thoughts Meenakshi

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  21. Purba19 February 2013 at 15:48

    Still waters run deep...

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond23 February 2013 at 06:39

      Sure they do! Thanks for visiting my space, Purba!

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  22. Sri Valli20 February 2013 at 00:45

    Beautiful set dear! first one is my fav!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond23 February 2013 at 06:39

      Thanks Valli, A word from poet of your calibre means a lot to me.

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  23. Anonymous20 February 2013 at 01:39

    Wonderful.

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