a woman...a being...and everything in between
Beautiful ... the 2nd one is mesmerizing !!!
I am happy you liked it, Amrit! Thanks!!
Nice contrast buildup!
Thanks for visiting Rachna!
I am happy it was able to delight you. Thanks for being here.
Wow! Lovely both!!
Thanks you so much for visiting and boosting my morale.
Splendid...Haiku...amazing description of contextual content...!!!
Thanks a lot, Anjan!
Thank you so much for coming to my space!
Lovely...2nd one awesome!
Superb! 2nd one very well amplify the meaning of the 1st one.
Both haiku are strung onto the same thread. Thank you so much for reading them so thoughtfully.
love your posts (i am sounding like a broken record but what else can i say? your poetry is different from others.)
But that lovely comment, Deb! I hope you find my words good enough to keep visiting.
Thanks a lot!
Your second haiku is exquisite! Still, I lap at the dew...After Chiyo-Ni
I too! Thanks a lot!
They are both quite wonderful
exquisitel composition . both of them :)
Thank you so much, Maliny!
Both so evocative!
You too Went for loss, disappointmentIrreversible changeNiceJzB
Thanks a lot! I look forward to your little gems.
Eloquence with so few words! I feel the sadness in both verses. Well done!
Thanks a lot, Wabi! Your haiku are simply awesome.
wow.. brilliant choice of words.
I loved the first one. Fleeting fame says all...
Both Haiku have a certain charm, the second one esp left me thirsty for more...
How well both your haiku pieces complement each other. Each adds more meaning to the other, even though they both hold a beauty of their own.A beautiful composition, as always.
I wanted to convey same feeling of disillusionment through them. Your comments suggest that I didn't fail.
Divine haiku ~ with lovely messages ~ ^_^
Perceptive-esp the first one.
Fabulous as always.Enjoyed reading every word.
You are so kind, Thank you so much!
loved both the haiku ...
great lines very thoughtful,applaudable
I am delighted, thanks a lot!
Love the way you constraint your words and yet say so much more.... Absolutely brilliant, Meenakshi.
Haiku are infectious, you try too!
...and that is why i love this blog so much :)
You absolutely made my day! Thanks a lot!
Nice analogy. Beautiful Haiku!
Thanks for being here and liking.