Tuesday, 1 January 2013

एक रिश्ता बेनाम




मेरे यार मुझको बता,

ऐसी अशर्फी, कोई ऐसा सिक्का।

जो तेरे एहसानों से मुझको उबार दे,

मेरी रूह से तेरा कर्ज़ा उतार दे।



जो होते हैं अक्सर मोहब्बत के किस्से,

महज़ हैं वो दिल की तिज़ारत की किस्से।

पर तूने ना नज़रों से कीमत ही आंकी,

ना मेरे दिल में हिस्सेदारी मांगी,

ना रिश्तों का इलज़ाम मेरे सर पे डाला,

ना दुनिया भर में मेरा नाम उछाला,

इक डोर नाज़ुक सी हमको है बांधे,

ना कोई कसमें, मिलने के वादे,

कोई रंजो गम, कोई चाहत नहीं है,

फख्त इत्मिनान है के तू बस यहीं है,



करूँ शुक्रिया इतना इख्तियार दे,

मेरी रूह से तेरा कर्ज़ा उतार दे।


Picture taken from: feelings2share.com

30 comments:

  1. The last line just makes it perfect !!!

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  2. woww... serene..
    clear Hindi font... how? which one u use?

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  3. Thank Sreeja!

    I wrote it in blogger only.

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  4. hmmmmmmmmmmm a ting of sadness too..

    but a lovely emotional poem

    Bikram's

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  5. Hi Meenakshi,

    A poetic beginning to the year 2013 and we're speaking of unnamed relations already. :)
    You write good Hindi poetry, keep up the momentum through the year. :)

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog | My FB Page

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    1. Thanks Jay, I hope you are never disappointed.

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  6. Lajawaab...aapki hindi ki kavitay to behatareeen hai...labj nahi hai mere pass ki is kavita ki tarif kar pau.

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    1. Oh! That's an honour!

      Thank you so much!!

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  7. That's a deeply reflective poem... The complex web of relations and its hidden facets, nice one

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  8. Totally fell in love with it. Beautiful poetry.

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  9. फख्त इत्मिनान है के तू बस यहीं है,

    kya yahi pyar hai?

    haan yahi pyar hai :))

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    1. Thanks Rajni,

      'Sirf ehsaas hai ye rooh se mehsoor karo,

      Pyar ko pyar hi rehne do koi naam na do.'

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  10. meri rooh pe ye karz taa-umra qubool hai
    jo teri mohabbat bhi fakht ik kissa ne ho...

    Ye andaaz-e- bayaan bahut khoobsoorat hai...

    cheers
    Odyzz
    Nav varsh ki shubhkaamnaayein.. :)

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  11. chahe kisson mein kat jai ye raat yunhin,

    par vo raat na aaye, jiska tu hissa na ho...


    A Very happy new year to you too!

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    1. tere hi kisse hon,zubaani teri sunta rahoon yunhi
      aisi koi raat na hogi jiska tu hissa ne ho

      Sorry for messing out your space dear..words are just flowing(though my words are not adding so much beauty as those of yours)

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    2. Oh! You are most welcome..It is absolutely my pleasure!

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  12. kya baat kya baat!welcome 2013.keep it up!

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  13. Beautiful! Long live such relationships!

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    1. Thank you so much! Your words mean a lot to me.

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  14. बहुत ही उम्दा !

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