मेरे यार मुझको बता,
ऐसी अशर्फी, कोई ऐसा सिक्का।
जो तेरे एहसानों से मुझको उबार दे,
मेरी रूह से तेरा कर्ज़ा उतार दे।
जो होते हैं अक्सर मोहब्बत के किस्से,
महज़ हैं वो दिल की तिज़ारत की किस्से।
पर तूने ना नज़रों से कीमत ही आंकी,
ना मेरे दिल में हिस्सेदारी मांगी,
ना रिश्तों का इलज़ाम मेरे सर पे डाला,
ना दुनिया भर में मेरा नाम उछाला,
इक डोर नाज़ुक सी हमको है बांधे,
ना कोई कसमें, न मिलने के वादे,
कोई रंजो गम, कोई चाहत नहीं है,
फख्त इत्मिनान है के तू बस यहीं है,
करूँ शुक्रिया इतना इख्तियार दे,
मेरी रूह से तेरा कर्ज़ा उतार दे।
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The last line just makes it perfect !!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
Deletewoww... serene..
ReplyDeleteclear Hindi font... how? which one u use?
Thank Sreeja!
ReplyDeleteI wrote it in blogger only.
hmmmmmmmmmmm a ting of sadness too..
ReplyDeletebut a lovely emotional poem
Bikram's
Hi Meenakshi,
ReplyDeleteA poetic beginning to the year 2013 and we're speaking of unnamed relations already. :)
You write good Hindi poetry, keep up the momentum through the year. :)
Regards
Jay
My Blog | My FB Page
Thanks Jay, I hope you are never disappointed.
DeleteLajawaab...aapki hindi ki kavitay to behatareeen hai...labj nahi hai mere pass ki is kavita ki tarif kar pau.
ReplyDeleteOh! That's an honour!
DeleteThank you so much!!
That's a deeply reflective poem... The complex web of relations and its hidden facets, nice one
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma!
DeleteTotally fell in love with it. Beautiful poetry.
ReplyDeleteThank a ton!
Deletebahut, bahut sundar!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sir!
Deleteफख्त इत्मिनान है के तू बस यहीं है,
ReplyDeletekya yahi pyar hai?
haan yahi pyar hai :))
Thanks Rajni,
Delete'Sirf ehsaas hai ye rooh se mehsoor karo,
Pyar ko pyar hi rehne do koi naam na do.'
wah wah
ReplyDeletedhanyavad!
Deletemeri rooh pe ye karz taa-umra qubool hai
ReplyDeletejo teri mohabbat bhi fakht ik kissa ne ho...
Ye andaaz-e- bayaan bahut khoobsoorat hai...
cheers
Odyzz
Nav varsh ki shubhkaamnaayein.. :)
chahe kisson mein kat jai ye raat yunhin,
ReplyDeletepar vo raat na aaye, jiska tu hissa na ho...
A Very happy new year to you too!
Deletetere hi kisse hon,zubaani teri sunta rahoon yunhi
aisi koi raat na hogi jiska tu hissa ne ho
Sorry for messing out your space dear..words are just flowing(though my words are not adding so much beauty as those of yours)
Oh! You are most welcome..It is absolutely my pleasure!
Deletekya baat kya baat!welcome 2013.keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThank you!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Long live such relationships!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! Your words mean a lot to me.
Deleteबहुत ही उम्दा !
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! Welcome to my blog!!
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