Saturday, 15 December 2012

Wishes...



holy night
Door creeks, anybody there?
fingers crossed

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God gave man
Wish to fly, forgot the wings
Never told why!


written for Haiku Heights
Picture taken from: gabrielal.multiply.com., flickr.com, 
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56 comments:

  1. anthonynorth15 December 2012 at 13:06

    Enjoyed both. Nicely done.

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  2. Anonymous15 December 2012 at 15:34

    I think these haiku are amazing. I especially love the second one ~ brilliant!

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  3. MamaTim15 December 2012 at 19:15

    man never stop questioning, wishing..
    We wish in silent, we pray aloud, amen.. amen.. - ♥

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond16 December 2012 at 06:22

      We wish in silent, we pray aloud, You had me thinking, are there some wishes we are ashamed to say aloud.

      Thanks for reading!

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  4. Amrit Sinha15 December 2012 at 20:53

    The 2nd one is amazing .... you are such a perfect haiku writer ... there is so much to learn in your posts :-)

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond16 December 2012 at 06:24

      This will take some time to sink in..........thanks:)

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  5. Sri Valli15 December 2012 at 21:35

    Lovely set!
    I loved the second one...wish he had imparted wings too!

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond16 December 2012 at 06:25

      Thanks Valli, I must say here your haiku on this prompt is amazing. I couldn't push it out of my mind!

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    2. Sri Valli16 December 2012 at 08:30

      Thank you so much dear :)

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  6. Panchali15 December 2012 at 22:29

    Extraordinary! What talent you have...when will I learn to write Haiku. Syllable-counting is such a hassle for me :(

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond16 December 2012 at 06:27

      Thank you so much, I don't know if this is worth these kind words. But I am elated!!

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  7. Rajni Sinha16 December 2012 at 02:08

    loved the second one more than the first which is fabulous:))

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  8. umashankar16 December 2012 at 02:25

    Bulls eye! Beauties.

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  9. Fast Music slow traffic16 December 2012 at 02:33

    Both are equally amaizing... first one is very deep

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  10. Tarang Sinha16 December 2012 at 02:38

    Nice set! I liked the second one especially!:)

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  11. Unknown16 December 2012 at 05:19

    love it... both of the sets were awesome...
    first one shows an expectation...while the second one calls for human aspiration...!!!

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  12. Woman'n'Beyond16 December 2012 at 06:20

    Thanks for visiting!!

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  13. Sri Valli16 December 2012 at 08:29

    Thanks for the sweet comment on my blog :)
    You made me smile :)

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  14. Unknown16 December 2012 at 19:25

    loved it!loved it!

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  15. Judith Westerfield16 December 2012 at 19:35

    LOVE the rhyme, rhythm and wishes.

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  16. AmitAag16 December 2012 at 22:07

    Awesome write!

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  17. Anonymous16 December 2012 at 23:42

    Very nice Meenakshi :)

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  18. Anonymous17 December 2012 at 01:47

    Beautiful words

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  19. Hazel17 December 2012 at 02:30

    I like to think it's Santa with his sack of goodies at the door:)

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  20. Bikram17 December 2012 at 10:44

    hmmm it oculd b eanybody now .. I would hope santa

    and good did not give feathers .. imagine the damage mankind would have done

    Bikram's

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond17 December 2012 at 18:43

      Santa or papa, or any guest that you wish should join in the snowy, lonely festive night.

      hahaha.........So Bikram here fighting God'd case. But I agree....We have already snatched land from other creatures. Atleast sky should be spared.

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  21. provoqd17 December 2012 at 11:37

    Hi Meenakshi,

    'wish to fly, forgot the wings' Wonderful lines. Good creativity.
    Keep posting good stuff. :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond17 December 2012 at 18:44

      Thank you so much, Jay! I hope I never disappoint you!

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  22. DEBAJYOTI17 December 2012 at 12:23

    yes, god forgot the wings. loved those lines!

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  23. Sreeja18 December 2012 at 08:54

    i loved the second one... :-)

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  24. eyeography18 December 2012 at 09:05

    Beautiful haiku...The second one is superb...

    Thanks for stopping by my blog :)

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  25. anamica mehra18 December 2012 at 15:02

    beautiful words.wah comes out naturally. keep up the gr8 work.wondering I know u for so long now but didn't know about ur this azaming qulaity.

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  26. Unknown19 December 2012 at 00:26

    I read, admire
    never comment..
    never find what to say
    short of words, I pray...

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond19 December 2012 at 01:58

      Your prayers shine like light to show me the path ahead. Thank you so much for your poem full of love and blessings!

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  27. Prema19 December 2012 at 07:47

    the second one really said it well. but even if he did not give us wings, he gave us the power to fly, to soar and reach out to anything our heart desired.

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond19 December 2012 at 08:07

      true! Our mind power spans more than wings!

      Thanks Prema!

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  28. Anonymous19 December 2012 at 20:30

    These are wonderful. Love the photos as well.

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    1. Woman'n'Beyond19 December 2012 at 20:39

      Thank you so much for visiting and appreciating!

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  29. Unknown31 January 2013 at 21:01

    God gave man
    wish to fly

    forgot the wings
    inspired to try..

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