Hi Meenakshi, Wonderful portrayal of Nature's fury and wrath in the form of poetry. Humans can certainly learn a lot from nature, if only we shed our egos and inhibitions. Liked this one. Keep posting :)
Thanks Jay, Goddess Durga is nature personified. It is gentle as mother when comes to nurture but can become Kali, all powerful, all destroying when comes to teach man a lesson.
I am not a big fan of haiku...though...the more i get to know about it...the more i am being attached to it...it's really wonderful how few lines can express a lot of things that even an entire para or blog cannot...loved it...!!!
You have explain the nature in very nice way,actually human can learn a lot from nature.You are getting better and better in haiku.well done keep it up!
Thank you so much! I know efforts you made to find out what haiku is just to appreciate my writings. This is rare and I will never forget this gesture of affection. You encouraged me on every step, writing, starting blog and then just keep doing it. If this not true friendship, what is!
Beautiful ... your haiku really has a life of its own :-)
ReplyDeleteCOOL! I really like the rhyme - I think I'm just old fashioned that way.
ReplyDeleteI too...thanks for visiting!
Deletei am falling in love with your haikus..
ReplyDeleteThis one is mesmerising..
I am hungry for more.. :)
Thanks Deepak, why don't you try this form!
DeleteThis is wonderful...I loved the second one..it says quite a lot...
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja!
DeleteHi Meenakshi,
ReplyDeleteWonderful portrayal of Nature's fury and wrath in the form of poetry. Humans can certainly learn a lot from nature, if only we shed our egos and inhibitions.
Liked this one. Keep posting :)
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
Thanks Jay, Goddess Durga is nature personified. It is gentle as mother when comes to nurture but can become Kali, all powerful, all destroying when comes to teach man a lesson.
ReplyDeleteStorms can leave so much devastation and suffering. It often allows us to come together and drop our pride. Insightful and beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!
DeleteIts difficult to rhyme in haiku style....Beautiful writing!
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli, As Judith said, May be I am old fashioned;)
DeleteI am not a big fan of haiku...though...the more i get to know about it...the more i am being attached to it...it's really wonderful how few lines can express a lot of things that even an entire para or blog cannot...loved it...!!!
ReplyDeletehay Anjan, thanks for these generous words. You made my effort worthwhile.
DeleteThe great leveler!
ReplyDeleteNature surely is ! Thanks for visiting.
Deletenice one ---do read mine have tried my hands at that form
ReplyDeleteHey I read that,wonderful attempt, keep writing!
Deleteawesome one meenakshi :) :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinisha. I am glad you liked it!!
DeleteYou have explain the nature in very nice way,actually human can learn a lot from nature.You are getting better and better in haiku.well done keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! I know efforts you made to find out what haiku is just to appreciate my writings. This is rare and I will never forget this gesture of affection. You encouraged me on every step, writing, starting blog and then just keep doing it. If this not true friendship, what is!
Deletea heart felt thanks and a BIG hug!
:)rula diya na.
Deletewow!! just wow!! nature indeed is impartial..
ReplyDeleteMy take: Death By Breeze
Thanks Sankara! your is amazing!
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