‘‘mellow wings, tied on hind,
soared in sky, danced
in wind…
pulled, manipulated,
followed, cried for,
snapped, bewildered, shoved
to floor,
torn, bedraggled, needed no
more…
uncaring, unemotional shrieks,
galore!
new string-tied dancing
about,
amidst indifferent
,impassive clouds…’
Picture taken from:sandeepthethinker.blogspot.com
hmmmmm sad at first and then excitement
ReplyDeletenew change... is always good then ..
Bikram's
agree, the old has to make way for the new!
DeleteLove the rhyme in these lines ... amazing !!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, encouraging as always!
Deletethis is an amazing poem!! you have expressed so much in so few words!! as a matter of fact, i think, most of us won't be able to do it at all, forget word count. applause!!!
ReplyDeleteThis was a spontaneous expression, not bound by any word count.
DeleteThank you so much for visiting and appreciating!
Lovely rhyming lines...it seems to me a galore of life...universities yes...but those who dream to fly among all unfamiliarity life endows them with success...!!!
ReplyDeleteI am glad you liked it, Unfamiliar paths often lead to greater joy!
DeleteNever lose hope, from bedraggled to joy in impassivity...Loved the verse :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Reshma!
Deletethe picture describes the line so well---beautiful
ReplyDeleteIt is very difficult to find suitable picture that does complete justice to the composition. I am glad you found my effort worthwhile!
DeleteSuperb.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sir and welcome to my blog!
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