Friday, 14 December 2012

Dispensable...





‘mellow wings, tied on hind,
soared in sky, danced in wind…
pulled, manipulated, followed, cried for,
snapped, bewildered, shoved to floor,
torn, bedraggled, needed no more…
uncaring, unemotional shrieks, galore!
new string-tied dancing about,
amidst indifferent ,impassive clouds…’

Picture taken from:sandeepthethinker.blogspot.com

14 comments:

  1. hmmmmm sad at first and then excitement

    new change... is always good then ..

    Bikram's

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    1. agree, the old has to make way for the new!

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  2. Love the rhyme in these lines ... amazing !!!

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  3. this is an amazing poem!! you have expressed so much in so few words!! as a matter of fact, i think, most of us won't be able to do it at all, forget word count. applause!!!

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    1. This was a spontaneous expression, not bound by any word count.

      Thank you so much for visiting and appreciating!

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  4. Lovely rhyming lines...it seems to me a galore of life...universities yes...but those who dream to fly among all unfamiliarity life endows them with success...!!!

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    1. I am glad you liked it, Unfamiliar paths often lead to greater joy!

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  5. Never lose hope, from bedraggled to joy in impassivity...Loved the verse :)

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  6. the picture describes the line so well---beautiful

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    1. It is very difficult to find suitable picture that does complete justice to the composition. I am glad you found my effort worthwhile!

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