Monday, 26 November 2012

Thankless Soul



Bare feet on desert
Sand sears, peels, sends shocks through
Layers of my being

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Layers of my being
Pine for shelter of cool big tree
Mercy for thankless soul

written for Haiku Heights
Picture taken from: colourbox.com

17 comments:

  1. Powerful and poignant. Beautifully written.

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  2. You create an amazing caricature of the thankless soul. Beautifully written.

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    1. Thanks for reading, dear! Thanks for your kind words!!

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  3. Completely mesmerized, Meenakshi.....!! Beautifully penned.

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    1. Thanks for these encouraging words, Mam, You made my day!

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  4. A thankless heart like the sands of a desert.. interesting take, nicely done!

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    1. I appreciate you took time out to read this. Thanks!

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  5. Very nice haiku and suitable photo picture. My wishes.

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  6. Hi Meenakshi. I'm in love with your poetic piece and also the accompanying photo of feet in sand..
    I have not submitted anything this week, just going round, admiring - ♥

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