Tuesday, 6 November 2012

कुछ पत्ते कुछ हम




सोचा कुछ बाहर टहलें,
कुछ सुनलें और कुछ कहलें,
शायद यूँ ही दिल बहले, 
पर न कुछ बोले पत्ते, और न कुछ बोले हम।

यूँ हवा ने मारा झटका,
मन पत्तों जैसा भटका,
फिर ला धरती पे पटका,
कुछ टूटे टूटे पत्ते, कुछ छूटे छूटे हम।

काले बादल घिर आये,
साये और गहराए,
अब कुछ भी सूझ ना पाए,
कुछ गहराए से पत्ते, कुछ घबराए से हम।



बादल ने आपा खोया,
पत्तों से धूल को धोया,
मन फूट फूट के रोया,
कुछ धुले धुले से पत्ते, कुछ खुले खुले से हम।


Picture taken from: incrediblesnaps.com

27 comments:

  1. The last line really touches the heart ... well done !!!

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    1. Now, I wait for your comment, thanks GS!

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  2. light hearted refreshing poetry.. i love it.

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  3. hum bhi waha saath chal rahe the aapke....
    loved it...:-)

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  4. Wow, Sreeja, humbled by the appreciation!

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  5. purani wali poems yaad aa gai didi.....loved it....

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    1. Thanks a sis, you are always an inspiration.

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  6. you express soo well.great ...... god bless you.

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  7. A big thanks, your blessings and appreciation mean a lot to me!

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  8. 'Kuch gehraye se pattein, kuch ghabrayein se hum.'
    Beautiful comparisons drawn in this poem.
    Lovely post. Keep up the good work. :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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  9. Nice poem Meenakshi! The theme was brilliant and the last lines of every stanza was gripping. Loved it.

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  10. ...behad sundar kavita, Meenakshi:)
    so simple and yet so deeply touching! I loved it!

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    1. Your appreciation is my motivation, Thanks you, Sir.

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  11. vyakul man aur patte ki khoobsoorat vyataha...like it :)

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  12. कुछ धुले धुले से पत्ते, कुछ खुले खुले से हम

    you want to read such lines again and again..

    there is something about them.. the power of nature, poetry and beauty..

    its so refreshing..

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    1. Thank Deepak, You yourself is such an amazing writer!

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  13. phir se jo kalam uthai
    yaadein taaza ho aayi
    wo soch wahi gehraai
    wahi jhoome jhoome patte, wahi doobe doobe hum....

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