सोचा कुछ बाहर टहलें,
कुछ सुनलें और कुछ कहलें,
शायद यूँ ही दिल बहले,
पर न कुछ बोले पत्ते, और न कुछ बोले हम।
यूँ हवा ने मारा झटका,
मन पत्तों जैसा भटका,
फिर ला धरती पे पटका,
कुछ टूटे टूटे पत्ते, कुछ छूटे छूटे हम।
काले बादल घिर आये,
साये और गहराए,
अब कुछ भी सूझ ना पाए,
कुछ गहराए से पत्ते, कुछ घबराए से हम।
बादल ने आपा खोया,
पत्तों से धूल को धोया,
मन फूट फूट के रोया,
कुछ धुले धुले से पत्ते, कुछ खुले खुले से हम।
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The last line really touches the heart ... well done !!!
ReplyDeleteNow, I wait for your comment, thanks GS!
Deletelight hearted refreshing poetry.. i love it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Deepak!
Deletehum bhi waha saath chal rahe the aapke....
ReplyDeleteloved it...:-)
Wow, Sreeja, humbled by the appreciation!
ReplyDeleteBahut sundar! Wah wah!
ReplyDeletedhanyavaad!
Deletepurani wali poems yaad aa gai didi.....loved it....
ReplyDeleteThanks a sis, you are always an inspiration.
Deleteyou express soo well.great ...... god bless you.
ReplyDeleteA big thanks, your blessings and appreciation mean a lot to me!
ReplyDelete'Kuch gehraye se pattein, kuch ghabrayein se hum.'
ReplyDeleteBeautiful comparisons drawn in this poem.
Lovely post. Keep up the good work. :)
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
Thanks, Jay
DeleteNice poem Meenakshi! The theme was brilliant and the last lines of every stanza was gripping. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Diwakar. Welcome to my blog!
Delete...behad sundar kavita, Meenakshi:)
ReplyDeleteso simple and yet so deeply touching! I loved it!
Your appreciation is my motivation, Thanks you, Sir.
Deletevyakul man aur patte ki khoobsoorat vyataha...like it :)
ReplyDeletedhnyavaad!
Deleteकुछ धुले धुले से पत्ते, कुछ खुले खुले से हम
ReplyDeleteyou want to read such lines again and again..
there is something about them.. the power of nature, poetry and beauty..
its so refreshing..
Thank Deepak, You yourself is such an amazing writer!
Deletevery nice
ReplyDeleteswayed away with it...
Thank you, sunil!
Deletephir se jo kalam uthai
ReplyDeleteyaadein taaza ho aayi
wo soch wahi gehraai
wahi jhoome jhoome patte, wahi doobe doobe hum....
bahut khoob!
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