my darling, my angel!
a piece of body, a piece of my soul,
my lovely daughter!
how I want to see you happy....
I want to give you everything, I wished, wanted for myself
the perfect bliss, the perfect knowledge, the perfect life
I am scared you will make...mistakes I made,
I want to shield, protect, take you in my arms and hide
you are so precious, so vulnerable...I hug you tightly, you feel uncomfortable
you want to break free, I tighten my embrace,
you scream...let me go..give me my space
I am hurt...
am I transgressing, is that not my right, to nurture, to shade you from sunlight!
I recoil... the very shade hath you wilting,
stunned....I blame, disapprove, push back.
your accusing eyes make me crack
my ego, my soul... bruised, fallen, snapped
I concede....let go, you are happy...in your flight
May be once you are a mother, will feel my plight
when you are given a speck of life to nurture, how it feels,what it takes..
for now I know, you are destined, to make your own set of mistakes.
Picture taken from: aperfectworld.org
You write amazing poems ... welcome to the world of blogging ... I have followed your blog and looking forward to more writings from you :-) All the best !!!
ReplyDeletePS : You can switch off the word verification option that comes when some one comments on your blog :-) That would make your blog more reader friendly :-)
Thanks for visiting my blog. Keep writing :-)
A big thanks GS, that's super encouraging! I am very poor at managing this site...slowly picking up threads, thanks for suggestion!
ReplyDeletevery nice Meenakshi..
ReplyDeletesome wonderful thoughts there carved into a poem..
i loved the way you concluded it.. i always believe conclusion should always leave the reader thinking.. that's what you have done here..
beautiful, like always..
Thanks Deepak, It so generous of you to take time out to read my old post:):)
DeleteThanks for appreciating! I really look forward to your comments now.
very nice Meenakshi..
ReplyDeletesome wonderful thoughts there carved into a poem..
i loved the way you concluded it.. i always believe conclusion should always leave the reader thinking.. that's what you have done here..
beautiful, like always..