tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post5229386182600802438..comments2023-10-14T00:55:43.270-07:00Comments on Woman'n'Beyond: गीला गीला सूरजWoman'n'Beyondhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-45232117573793778902013-01-17T05:30:47.296-08:002013-01-17T05:30:47.296-08:00Thanks Mam, The pleasure would be all mine!Thanks Mam, The pleasure would be all mine!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-15641673319164296912013-01-17T04:03:37.238-08:002013-01-17T04:03:37.238-08:00All your poems are incomparable i need to come her...All your poems are incomparable i need to come here with more time on my hands.indu chhibberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17755152757229783585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-54232784580939259392013-01-12T03:48:37.183-08:002013-01-12T03:48:37.183-08:00You nailed it Bhavana, Last few days were so depre...You nailed it Bhavana, Last few days were so depressing and saddening and the lack of sun only aggravates the sense of darkening!<br /><br />Thanks for reading!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-8517236866932631592013-01-12T03:46:14.347-08:002013-01-12T03:46:14.347-08:00Thank Rajni, glad you liked it!Thank Rajni, glad you liked it!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-41552289108498659312013-01-11T08:08:48.576-08:002013-01-11T08:08:48.576-08:00You write hindi poetry? I do not have the felicity...You write hindi poetry? I do not have the felicity in verse...but something feels sweet here--the way you socialize the grey sun and the way you social and personal awakening needs with emerging sun...Bhavanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00799522192219059459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-13851816257967168742013-01-10T19:36:33.188-08:002013-01-10T19:36:33.188-08:00absolutely beautiful
but loved the following lin...absolutely beautiful <br /><br />but loved the following lines most<br /><br /><br />कुछ चिंगारियाँ उधार मांग लायें चलो,<br /><br /> कि तुम्हें कुछ सुकून आये <br /><br />और मेरे बरामदे में फिर धूप आये <br />Rajni Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08535246989455283777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-81126528874376198352013-01-09T08:19:00.889-08:002013-01-09T08:19:00.889-08:00Thaaannnnnnnnkkkkkkkk YYYYYYYoooooooouuuuuuuuu!
I...Thaaannnnnnnnkkkkkkkk YYYYYYYoooooooouuuuuuuuu!<br /><br />It is such a sweat gesture!<br /><br />I already sent it. ky aapke baramde mein aaj dhoop aayi??Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-89232675337096974212013-01-09T08:17:43.465-08:002013-01-09T08:17:43.465-08:00yeah, I enjoy it in the beginning, but then it kin...yeah, I enjoy it in the beginning, but then it kind of gets too much!!<br /><br />I am glad you enjoyed it!!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-81183271982239370622013-01-09T08:15:49.726-08:002013-01-09T08:15:49.726-08:00Thanks a lot!Thanks a lot!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-29689975967445497582013-01-09T04:27:09.158-08:002013-01-09T04:27:09.158-08:00Brilliant...mere mann ki baat chinn li...mere bara...Brilliant...mere mann ki baat chinn li...mere baramade mein bhi dhoop nahi aati<br />sardiya bada satati<br />jab tum bulao suraj ki uss sunehri kiran ko,<br />toh mera pata bhi zaroor batana...<br />kehna usse ki mere angana bhi zaroor muskurana!ekta khetanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13253258697971928171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-48192821466941618342013-01-09T02:42:36.763-08:002013-01-09T02:42:36.763-08:00oh yes .. fir se dhoop aye ..
but this gila gila ...oh yes .. fir se dhoop aye .. <br />but this gila gila mausam is also good.. I remember in chandigarh whenever it was like this .. we friends would get together and off to Uphill Kasauli via the back route ... <br /><br />IT use to be beautifullllllllllllll :) <br /><br />memories came back Meenakhshi reading this .. AWESOMEEEEEEEEE<br /><br /><a href="http://mannbikram.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">Bikram's</a>Bikramhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17320753339263375295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-30090883642593410722013-01-09T02:36:49.682-08:002013-01-09T02:36:49.682-08:00I love the lines सुखी लकड़ियाँ का अलाव जलायें चलो...I love the lines सुखी लकड़ियाँ का अलाव जलायें चलो,<br /><br /><br />कुछ चिंगारियाँ उधार मांग लायें चलो,<br /><br /><br /> कि तुम्हें कुछ सुकून आये <br /><br /><br />और मेरे बरामदे में फिर धूप आये <br /><br />kya baat haianamica mehrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04799446977295886621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-38226641518567196322013-01-09T01:38:19.383-08:002013-01-09T01:38:19.383-08:00Thanks Deepak, you made my day!
My writings are o...Thanks Deepak, you made my day!<br /><br />My writings are ordinary, but praise coming from poets like you makes them special.Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-56639500285121934192013-01-09T01:34:40.709-08:002013-01-09T01:34:40.709-08:00The words of praise from you are always uplifting,...The words of praise from you are always uplifting, Thank you, Sir!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-85922383631954533522013-01-09T01:34:00.797-08:002013-01-09T01:34:00.797-08:00Dhanyavaad Madan Mohan ji!Dhanyavaad Madan Mohan ji!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-8184686748105572122013-01-09T01:33:13.066-08:002013-01-09T01:33:13.066-08:00I am glad if it could reach your heart and make yo...I am glad if it could reach your heart and make you smile:)<br /><br />Absolutely a pleasure!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-59161210336505666272013-01-08T23:48:32.596-08:002013-01-08T23:48:32.596-08:00सुखी लकड़ियाँ का अलाव जलायें चलो,
कुछ चिंगारियाँ...सुखी लकड़ियाँ का अलाव जलायें चलो,<br /><br />कुछ चिंगारियाँ उधार मांग लायें चलो,<br /><br /> कि तुम्हें कुछ सुकून आये <br /><br />और मेरे बरामदे में फिर धूप आये..<br /><br /><br />Amit ji is spot on.. That's where you took us in and mesmerized us with your magic.. Superb write up Meenakshi... what i like the most about your writing is your versatility and the ease with which you write on different subjects, genre and language.. keep'em coming.. i am all game for it.. Deepak Kripalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11427901879844057618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-24718114944372088582013-01-08T22:41:00.069-08:002013-01-08T22:41:00.069-08:00"कुछ चिंगारियाँ उधार मांग लायें चलो,
कि तुम..."कुछ चिंगारियाँ उधार मांग लायें चलो,<br /><br /> कि तुम्हें कुछ सुकून आये <br /><br />और मेरे बरामदे में फिर धूप आये ..."<br />Absolutely heart touching and very beautiful!!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-191491270831263932013-01-08T22:24:18.915-08:002013-01-08T22:24:18.915-08:00मधुर भाव लिये भावुक करती रचना,बहुत अद्भुत अहसास......मधुर भाव लिये भावुक करती रचना,बहुत अद्भुत अहसास...सुन्दर प्रस्तुति<br />Madan Mohan Saxenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02335093546654008236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-9019619240841425132013-01-08T20:52:44.287-08:002013-01-08T20:52:44.287-08:00geela-geela sa suraj aur dil--- WOW!!!mera bhiga-b...geela-geela sa suraj aur dil--- WOW!!!mera bhiga-bhiga sa man khil utha is kavita ko parkar! Ati sundar:)Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-76566601366838291972013-01-08T18:54:51.767-08:002013-01-08T18:54:51.767-08:00Thank you, Sir!Thank you, Sir!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-77210226462447797152013-01-08T08:17:12.228-08:002013-01-08T08:17:12.228-08:00Thanks Reshma,
Really I implore sun to come out ...Thanks Reshma, <br /><br />Really I implore sun to come out and spread its sunshine!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-75325997683156083392013-01-08T08:15:53.394-08:002013-01-08T08:15:53.394-08:00I am glad if it could infuse that feeling!
Thanks...I am glad if it could infuse that feeling!<br /><br />Thanks a lot!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-87485335917690284712013-01-08T08:15:18.722-08:002013-01-08T08:15:18.722-08:00Thanks Sreeja!Thanks Sreeja!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-29183521904527293762013-01-08T07:41:33.370-08:002013-01-08T07:41:33.370-08:00The lines recreate the wintry feeling, the start i...The lines recreate the wintry feeling, the start is simply brilliant "सूरज गीला गीला सा..."Reshmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01640435257765195374noreply@blogger.com