tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post4933505369591425374..comments2023-10-14T00:55:43.270-07:00Comments on Woman'n'Beyond: Lord's Play!Woman'n'Beyondhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comBlogger52125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-14816690215702837672013-01-28T13:29:22.982-08:002013-01-28T13:29:22.982-08:00Lovely cascading haiku then... sounds like a water...Lovely cascading haiku then... sounds like a waterfall term... Love it. :-)Eliz Frankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13802327940937016461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-11522716475202678892013-01-28T09:47:42.494-08:002013-01-28T09:47:42.494-08:00Thanks for visiting my haiku of the same prompt. Y...Thanks for visiting my haiku of the same prompt. Yours is rich with imagery and intense with feelings. It grabbed my attention and hung on to the end. Well crafted.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-34276563708945459232013-01-28T04:34:32.320-08:002013-01-28T04:34:32.320-08:00Bird's agony is mother's call in distress ...Bird's agony is mother's call in distress Thanks for reading.Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-6254885833840649662013-01-28T04:31:59.161-08:002013-01-28T04:31:59.161-08:00Nature does seem to work on whims or we are oblivi...Nature does seem to work on whims or we are oblivious to the bigger picture.<br /><br />Thanks Susan.Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-2085613689758522402013-01-28T04:29:33.096-08:002013-01-28T04:29:33.096-08:00Thanks Hazel! I am glad you liked it.Thanks Hazel! I am glad you liked it.Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-10164414114130400552013-01-28T04:28:52.304-08:002013-01-28T04:28:52.304-08:00We are just puppets in His hands with some amount ...We are just puppets in His hands with some amount of free will allowed. <br /><br />Thanks a lot!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-26505032066197733722013-01-28T04:27:43.598-08:002013-01-28T04:27:43.598-08:00Thank you so much for your kind visit and apprecia...Thank you so much for your kind visit and appreciation!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-55359731880790729512013-01-28T04:05:03.192-08:002013-01-28T04:05:03.192-08:00An awesome poem. touches the heart.The bird's ... An awesome poem. touches the heart.The bird's agony can be felt by the reader.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06682758228934966786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-78451596917875237592013-01-27T19:45:54.120-08:002013-01-27T19:45:54.120-08:00Tragedy hidden in Lord's play, which contains ...Tragedy hidden in Lord's play, which contains its own remedy--not very consoling, to think it's whim-full!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-38546391998669088142013-01-27T17:39:23.457-08:002013-01-27T17:39:23.457-08:00Wonderful! An imagery of power captured so well.Wonderful! An imagery of power captured so well.Hazelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07866700983578714993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-42703959029458900292013-01-27T14:23:30.430-08:002013-01-27T14:23:30.430-08:00Amazing cycle involved here. "Who can know th...Amazing cycle involved here. "Who can know the mind of the Lord?"ND Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16510971525209549921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-73002780764402271932013-01-27T11:33:48.014-08:002013-01-27T11:33:48.014-08:00wow wow wow wow wow wow LLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-32874441273503416282013-01-27T07:46:17.552-08:002013-01-27T07:46:17.552-08:00Thanks Valli! Thank you so much!!Thanks Valli! Thank you so much!!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-87660340939778178032013-01-27T07:43:25.095-08:002013-01-27T07:43:25.095-08:00Thanks! That's called cascading haiku I guess ...Thanks! That's called cascading haiku I guess (even my knowledge is limited). <br /><br />Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-89159494915929961102013-01-27T07:41:34.458-08:002013-01-27T07:41:34.458-08:00Same here Mam, I so difficult to understand God...Same here Mam, I so difficult to understand God's ways.<br /><br />Thank you so much!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-47686138958463552602013-01-27T07:33:38.533-08:002013-01-27T07:33:38.533-08:00Thanks a lot!Thanks a lot!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-22303245660389300702013-01-27T03:57:15.279-08:002013-01-27T03:57:15.279-08:00Beautiful imagery in your mind! Beautifully writte...Beautiful imagery in your mind! Beautifully written Meenakshi :)Sri Vallihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04790303641221971643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-18690266850931882402013-01-27T03:01:31.527-08:002013-01-27T03:01:31.527-08:00This is a beautiful poem with lots of strong image...This is a beautiful poem with lots of strong imagery...I love the way you continue certain lines in each stanza. Enjoyed it.<br />ElizEliz Frankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13802327940937016461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-3000117558704215072013-01-26T23:27:21.539-08:002013-01-26T23:27:21.539-08:00Sometimes, I want to know God's thoughts...an ...Sometimes, I want to know God's thoughts...an emotive piece, so beautifully penned!:))Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-73632178801300708662013-01-26T23:02:39.625-08:002013-01-26T23:02:39.625-08:00nicely written,so much said in so few words.nicely written,so much said in so few words.Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-28039400254160205992013-01-26T20:47:15.039-08:002013-01-26T20:47:15.039-08:00Every animal displays motherly instinct, Thought t...Every animal displays motherly instinct, Thought the bird knows it can't fight fire, still it will not stop trying.<br /><br />I am happy you liked it.<br /><br />Thanks!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-15647450095123789372013-01-26T20:45:54.221-08:002013-01-26T20:45:54.221-08:00Thanks for the kind words!Thanks for the kind words!Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-54983346434074268032013-01-26T14:05:35.371-08:002013-01-26T14:05:35.371-08:00Wonderfully creative take on the prompt! Favorite...Wonderfully creative take on the prompt! Favorite line" wings shield eggs."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-59332707836091013232013-01-26T09:52:15.982-08:002013-01-26T09:52:15.982-08:00Beautifully crafted, Meenakshi. Beautifully crafted, Meenakshi. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5036603391382270745.post-18507005536678840282013-01-26T08:36:31.451-08:002013-01-26T08:36:31.451-08:00Thanks Judith for visit and appreciation.Thanks Judith for visit and appreciation.Woman'n'Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07531334717489796258noreply@blogger.com